cry myself to sleep

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 1st, '06, 12:50

sitting on my bed
tears pouring from my eyes
crying because you hurt me
and crying to pass the time

you tore my spirit into peices
and walked all over my heart
you slowly drain the life from me
and tear my world apart

my soul yerns for you
my body aches for your touch
never in my life
have i wanted something so much

and what i do every night
instead of counting sheep...
i sit up in my room
and i cry myself to sleep

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 1st, '06, 13:17

~Clarky~ wrote:Chil out

my god... its a poem... u chill out... geesh

by **MuNxMuN** » May 1st, '06, 13:26

i like it anna...it was sad though

g_killa wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
~Clarky~ wrote:Chil out

my god... its a poem... u chill out... geesh

dudes got a point i aint seen u right a happy poem yet

sometimes it's easier for a person to write sad stuff than happy stuff

by **AspirinE** » May 1st, '06, 13:27

My new poem

booo hooo, im so sad
booo hooo, i hate life so bad
might as well end it like emo kids do
all this shit that i delt with and lived through
booo hooooo booo hoooo, wats little me gonna do!

Lmao .... im sorry monkey but im just kind of no longer intereste in these kind of poems simply coz everyone on the internet is writing them. U should use creativity and write something metaphoric and something people actually relate too.

But it wasnt bad.

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 1st, '06, 13:34

AspirinE wrote:My new poem

booo hooo, im so sad
booo hooo, i hate life so bad
might as well end it like emo kids do
all this shit that i delt with and lived through
booo hooooo booo hoooo, wats little me gonna do!

Lmao .... im sorry monkey but im just kind of no longer intereste in these kind of poems simply coz everyone on the internet is writing them. U should use creativity and write something metaphoric and something people actually relate too.

But it wasnt bad.

shitty mood = shitty poem.... i am depressed... my poetry is gonna be depressed.... u guys dont like it.... no one told ya to read it......... and i dont apreciate the saracasm

by **MuNxMuN** » May 1st, '06, 13:35

AspirinE wrote:My new poem
booo hooo, im so sad
booo hooo, i hate life so bad
might as well end it like emo kids do
all this shit that i delt with and lived through
booo hooooo booo hoooo, wats little me gonna do!

umm....i don't find that funny :confusion:

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 1st, '06, 13:37

MuNxMuN wrote:
AspirinE wrote:My new poem
booo hooo, im so sad
booo hooo, i hate life so bad
might as well end it like emo kids do
all this shit that i delt with and lived through
booo hooooo booo hoooo, wats little me gonna do!

umm....i don't find that funny

me either..... :zipped:

by **AspirinE** » May 1st, '06, 13:38

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
AspirinE wrote:My new poem

booo hooo, im so sad
booo hooo, i hate life so bad
might as well end it like emo kids do
all this shit that i delt with and lived through
booo hooooo booo hoooo, wats little me gonna do!

Lmao .... im sorry monkey but im just kind of no longer intereste in these kind of poems simply coz everyone on the internet is writing them. U should use creativity and write something metaphoric and something people actually relate too.

But it wasnt bad.

shitty mood = shitty poem.... i am depressed... my poetry is gonna be depressed.... u guys dont like it.... no one told ya to read it......... and i dont apreciate the saracasm

U put it up for opinion, i posted my opinon.

This was a straight confrontation, its not even sarcasm, im just being completely honest about it.

I didnt say it was shitty, i just gave u some motivation to write something that differs.

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 1st, '06, 13:44

g_killa wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
MuNxMuN wrote:
AspirinE wrote:My new poem
booo hooo, im so sad
booo hooo, i hate life so bad
might as well end it like emo kids do
all this shit that i delt with and lived through
booo hooooo booo hoooo, wats little me gonna do!

umm....i don't find that funny

me either.....

thats cos its anti goth humour

i got it... i just didnt find it funny.... and im not fuckin goth......

by **MuNxMuN** » May 1st, '06, 13:46

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
g_killa wrote:
> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:
MuNxMuN wrote:
AspirinE wrote:My new poem
booo hooo, im so sad
booo hooo, i hate life so bad
might as well end it like emo kids do
all this shit that i delt with and lived through
booo hooooo booo hoooo, wats little me gonna do!

umm....i don't find that funny

me either.....

thats cos its anti goth humour

i got it... i just didnt find it funny.... and im not fuckin goth......

i just thought it was messed up :whistle:

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 1st, '06, 13:48

it was messed up :zipped:

by **AspirinE** » May 1st, '06, 13:50

> Evil _ MoNkEy < wrote:it was messed up

Lmao.. and .. i spend about 3 secondds to put 4 words that barely rhyme merely to show a point

Feel free to analyze it though. :whistle:

by **> Evil _ MoNkEy <** » May 2nd, '06, 09:28

Sarah wrote:No offence or anything but I think you guys are being a lil harsh. It's not nice to pick on someone just cos they write sad poems. If she feels depressed whilst writing something then it's gonna come out sad. You can't expect someone to write a happy poem when they're not in the mood...

Anyways, it was good Anna, very sad but very good

thank u... and ur sticking up means a lot to me :flower:

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