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Cold-Blooded

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Cold-Blooded

Postby jackychan » Oct 8th, '11, 00:18

im as intense as a 750 thousand watt electric fence
you boxed in, this isnt even as shocking as it gets
symetric riffs with heavy piano connections
throwing lightning bolts in every direction
and dont give a fuck who it hits
An evil grin with zero absolute innocence
but in a sense, im as innocent as OJ
my flows so fast it makes mustangs look like horseplay
and on a cold day, I sit with noone, just to grow pain
Not gay, actually the opposite of a bi, im blown
way too high to really be stoned, I have two roads
rockbottom or the sky, no highroad
its my soul ive sold so at the north pole i chill alone
Just me and my sniper, just the way i like it
i named her Whispering Death
my sick sidekick recoils into your psychic
silencer is key to keep you undertone
So BITCH! call me out if you feel safe in the battle zone!

Instrumental - "Lurking in the Grass"
http://www.hiphopinstrumental.net/downl ... p?cID=4707
You will have to scroll down and read through them to find the one i wrote this peice to. I could've taken this really far but chose not to for my own reasons. Tell me what you think.

ANYONE who dislikes, I will battle. lmoa
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Re: Cold-Blooded

Postby Sam. » Oct 8th, '11, 15:52

Link of Feedback bra ?!! Read the rules before posting shit here.
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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