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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Spyder » Oct 9th, '11, 17:05

thanks everyone for the feed :worship:
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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Sam. » Oct 9th, '11, 19:56

Geno wrote:Point 'em out then. :coffee:

Spyder wrote:
I know I said I was done, but I still got the will to battle more
After I attack, you Pentagon, leave you with half the Build you had before!
I flow to the seashore, no wait… I unno im done with this female
I meant youll hear my flow forever, your eardrum be-come a seashell!
You an aimless target tryin to make a mark by sayin hardships,
Ill put your face on cartons, sayin lost how this kids fame was started.
Ill have this dude missin, Geno sittin atop of a crude hit list
With rhymes this tight, shit I got Sick Lines like Soup Kitchens.
I havent really heard a personal, I knew that you never would
Shit I could probably diss myself better than you ever could, haha
I know im strainin your thoughts, its like your brain bashed and block
Watch your façade corrode, but im Composed, Sebastian Bach!
Your drop random points, you’re a scat-ter plot and its really tragic
How he a wordsmith when he worships Billy Talent?
Sayin I fold like a Deck, clever punch… this boys too much
Youll fall to my hand, im on some King Shit without a Royal Flush!
You end up Toyd and Fucked like Dildos, so this beef memorabilia
For this whole site to see how I left you Fuckin Dead like Necrophilia!
It pains me to see this Canadian freak cant accept he takin defeat
Youd Improve if you Branched Out Geno like your Family Tree… oh
Lookin like a case of rape and incest, a caveman’s incense
Thought “id like to look like a man” cut his hair, then placed on his chest,
The remains of what came from his head, “now im closer to Shady this time,
And my step-dad will no longer say “come here baby your mine”

Geno step back ok my track is great your raps a waste that I lacerate,
So how you expect to Hold Your Own when you cant even Masturbate!
I don’t expect a response cause by now, surely your text gone
But you can put 2 and 2 together and figure out why Ego bein Slept On.
Let me show you how my brain works, compile files like visionaries
The Left Sector equipped with Spell Checker, Right with Dictionary.
Thesaurus cortex supports text along with the mic in which he carries,
So when it transfers to words, the result is mouth spit Obituaries!
This is the last breath of your last lung, ill diminish ya,
Take my favorite lyrics pen to Signature… on your gravestone to finish ya.



Really ?
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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Spyder » Oct 9th, '11, 20:27

dont forget the flip of the fold like a deck line

and he loves Billy Talent ;)
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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Sam. » Oct 9th, '11, 20:58

Geno wrote:The Billy Talent line, the hair line...I guess.. and the fact that he mentions my online name is the only "personal" if you even wanna call it that.

And calling me a female is a good one. :coffee:

So there are personals right ? Why deny it in the 1st place ? :coffee: :coffee:
Spyder wrote:dont forget the flip of the fold like a deck line

and he loves Billy Talent ;)

Yeah ! that too. :toocool:
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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Sam. » Oct 9th, '11, 21:25

Geno wrote:Because they're weak and you're on his dick about it. :whistle:

Weak ? :unsure: and wh.... :coffee:
I'm not on anyones dick dude.I haven't said anything that suggest you that I'm taking his side in this.If you think so i would be heavily disappointed at you because we both are cool since a very long time.C'mon brah ! don't drag me into this ,i never thought you would say this.
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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Sam. » Oct 9th, '11, 21:34

Geno wrote:Someone pointed it out to me and it seems like you're the one I should be beefing with instead of Spyder tbh.

But whatever maaaaan.

I gave you the real Feed to your drop as to what I felt about it.Still you think this way ? I'm sad. :(
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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Sam. » Oct 9th, '11, 21:39

Gennette wrote:I said it's whatever man.

iight peace . :shifty:
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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Spyder » Oct 10th, '11, 01:27

so what u say Geno?

response or no.

all i need is yes or no, wont say anything beyond that
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Re: Spyder - Curtain Call

Postby Spyder » Oct 10th, '11, 03:14

fine with me, ill be waiting

if not its cool man
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