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EP Preview

Postby Blu » Dec 6th, '11, 07:42

Preview of the new written EP coming up.. Get ready.

START AT 0:15


Motherfuckers these times are always asking to test me
It was a good day for these rhymes , I don't wanna get messy
Maybe you could stay for these crimes, so the cops don't arrest me
Hell yeah it was a full house, 'till I slaughtered everyone but Jesse
I don't need prayers for Gotti, I just need God to bless me
I'm not gonna fall for no Illuminati, got my squad to stress me
Going skinny dipping in Jaws lake, waiting for something to digest me
Smart enough to start hinny whipping, I think Satan mighta blessed me
I think I might of heard him bumping in his Chrysler LeBaron
Kanye definitely wasn't lying, but I was just appointed the Charon
You better get your soul to dying, if you wanna become the next Baron
My mind's a useless barren, no wonder I always avoided Heron
This ain't the full thing, it's only a sneak preview
Get ready for the EP, if you're alive to make a review!
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Re: EP Preview

Postby J.R. » Dec 6th, '11, 22:04

Hell yeah it was a full house, 'till I slaughtered everyone but Jesse

One of my favorite lines. Cuz I love that show.

Decent piece, multis seem a bit forced.

Work on it. :y:
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Re: EP Preview

Postby SG. » Dec 7th, '11, 20:24

I think this was good. Once again, this is an improvement. The multis are forced, but they usually are for a first attempt at a go hard track. However, your flow's awesome. Keep practicing, homie.
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Re: EP Preview

Postby Man1x » Dec 8th, '11, 01:14

An improvement but things like "stress me", and "bless me" (I know the multis longer than 2 syllables) is sloppy writing. I'd try to stray away from rhyming the same word in your rhymes.
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