Immortal

[Spyder]

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Sickest rapper on bath salts, born from lab vaults
I don’t need Ultrasound to show your track faults!
I, Spit so quick like you hit fast forward
Haven’t caught my breath yet… but I’ve lapped yours.
Not the second comin of Christ, more like holocaust
I don’t pop bottles, I toss bottles with molotov
I’ve lost my mind, I mean its wandered off
If you’re lookin for it, it seems to respond to God!
I’m not bind by the sound arc I…
Split holes in the O-Zone using my sharp mind.
Archives part tides and leave you all destroyed
Words are weapons explains why you got hollow points!
I don’t think your ready for my pen’s state
Has me in state pens it touch ya like Penn State!
feestin while you menstruate, you heard it befo’
Just brings new meanin to girggle ya flow.
I bet your regret tryin to battle your hero
I stop molecules settin records to absolute zero.
Voice reigns supreme like murderous thunder
Put your jaw on the block if you need help curbin your hunger!
Left your freedom of speech shackled in dungeons
Picked up the fork in the road and ate your path of destruction!
You wallow and cry for being more common than I,
Never claimed to be fly, walk upside down on the sky.
Was gonna sit there and watch you die,
But I spit lyrics to heal outta my Jaws of Life!
This violent? You haven’t heard my worst rap
All these are just shock waves from my first track.
Wake up screamin in sparring fits
Hit the sandman, ripped his heart to bits.
Leave ya dead when I lock load and target hits,
buy my opponents grave spots as parting gifts!

[Sam.]

Damn! This is one of the hottest shit that you've dropped lately. I remember how amazed I was reading this with the Beat when you sent me this yesterday. The Punchlines that you've done on this are on altogether a different level of dopeness, it's not that Complex but the level of Imagination that you've put behind this makes this great. Reading this reminded me of Rhyme Asylum tbh, it was almost there.

But there's some redundancy in the Lyrics, the "freedom of speech" line had already been done by Rhyme Asylum. Plus some of the lines are very much similar to the thing that I had written weeks ago, so I can say that I'm advancing too in the correct direction.

This had set a standard for me(Not dick riding you), I'll try my best to make some.. better.

[Spyder]

haha thanks bro

yea this was a rhyme asylum-esque piece

i heart their punches/ phrase combination

[Sam.]

That style of Lyricism is unique and needs focus and an accurate observation of things, very few succeed in that. It's cool that you're one of them.(Gotta step my game up too )

[Spyder]

well i think you grasped their style well in 3MTD
just unfortunetly most readers didnt get it, and your accent made some of the end rhymes
hard to flow to, which they seemed to concentrate more on.

either way, their punches/this piece punches
are just as complex as my usual ones, just dont break down words and what not

"picked up the fork in the road and ate your path of destruction"
honestly impressed myself

[Sam.]

Thanks man.

"Haven’t caught my breath yet… but I’ve lapped yours."

"Words are weapons explains why you got hollow points!"

"Voice reigns supreme like murderous thunder"

"buy my opponents grave spots as parting gifts!"

...... etc

[Spyder]

put your jaw on the block if you need help curbin your hunger

[Ka0t1c]

great imagery, smart piece, much respect, your words paint a picture in my head well

[Spyder]

bump

edited with new audio link

[ilovebender.com]

That was tight, the first few bars were tight.

[Spyder]

thanks bro haha

[Yah-hah]

Still got it huh sucka lol The molotov line was cool. Good to see a familiar face or two around here. Good shit man

[Spyder]

yah's alive, this is what this threads about now ahah

if ur stayin PM me, i got sumin

im mostly audio now tho

[ShAdYTiLIDie]

SICKKKK MAN!!!!! Im new here but thats the dopest verse I have seen so far.. MY favorite was " Left your freedom of speech shackled in dungeons
Picked up the fork in the road and ate your path of destruction!" Love it man. keep it up.

[Spyder]

thanks for readin bro