Shit On You

[CrashBand]

Nice piece, some funny lines which I think was the aim with this piece. Loved the last rhyme scheme and thought it ended well.

Definitely felt a slim shady vibe. Which was obviously from the d12 influence over this beat.
Nice drop

[JamaicanPattlez]

Nice job, no criticism except for:

"I make a whore quite queasy, hence the puke, I
Think I'm the only one who understands my sense of humor"

Dunno what you were attempting there.

[Mr.DGAF]

This is pretty solid. I'm not a fan of splitting the bars, that's one thing that kind of threw me off a bit haha. The rhyming though is solid, it felt like a little bit of it was forced, like the "hence the puke, I" line, which goes back to me personally not digging the bar split haha. But it was pretty decent, you had a good flow and the point gets across. Definitely see the influence by D12 too.

Mind hitting a brutha up with some feed mane?