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Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 2nd, '12, 07:42

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Ok..
Im the nicest to spit when Im reciting this script
Only thing I got in this world outside of my kids!!
Is my mic and my dick, so I put my life in this shit
And put my rhymes on toilet paper, everything I write is the shit!!
Im so far gone, youll never reach the level my bars on
Youll get Lynched when I go into beast mode..Marshawn!!
Bitch Im a martian, marchin turn this planet to rubble
And that’s just off the dome, if I plan it, its trouble!!
See god damnit Im double, every last one of these rappers
Truthfully youd need a creek to see some of these bass turds!!
I leave em with fractures, breakin the form of his mandible
And devourin his flesh, yes it’s the norm of a cannibal!!
Im sort of a Hannibal, but really Im more of an animal
So when I see emcees flee from me, its so understandable!!
Im verbal nuclear plutonium, so challengers fall out dead
And if youre appeased to disagree, head to the call out thread!!
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Re: Quick 16

Postby _Steven_ » Apr 2nd, '12, 09:42

Hahaha this was mad funny, some great punches in there and multis and flow was on point throughout, the toilet paper punch was dope haha, and the ending was brilliant, nice drop bro
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Re: Quick 16

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 2nd, '12, 10:22

Good looks bro :y:
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Re: Quick 16

Postby Spyder » Apr 2nd, '12, 18:45

cant wait til u get back on hard shit, this wasnt the norm i see from you
but that much time off surely rust will show

good lookin tho
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Re: Quick 16

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 2nd, '12, 23:47

Nahh, theres no rust just dust, and under it Im a well oiled machine sent to spoil the dreams of any social regime lol

but yeh, I will get back to my regularly scheduled punches soon lmao
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Re: Quick 16

Postby ShAdYTiLIDie » Apr 3rd, '12, 03:25

Damn liked this a lot, great flow. Keep it up dude! havent read any of your old stuff but I can tell your pretty good, looking forward to seeing a real track.
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Re: Quick 16

Postby Strictt Ame » Apr 3rd, '12, 07:57

^Thanks..and the link to my music is in my sig
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