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Was It Worth It

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Was It Worth It

Postby Inzanity » May 21st, '06, 02:02

I worte this like 6 months ago and I forgot all about it I just found it on the floor in my room

(Verse 1)
I bet u don't know what it's like 2 love some1 u don't wanna love
u try 2 hate them but u can't even after all that they've done
u look 4 an alternate excape route some where to run
only to find that there is no ex-cape, so ur stuck wit a wrecked fate
wen the phone rings u know that it's them callin' u
all they do is hurt u and it's a trap u always fall into
wen theres a knock at the door u know it's them knockin'
their the cause of ur pain so u built up a shield around ur heart to block it
but even the strongest shield wouldn't be able to stop it
cause the pain is still there, and deep down ur still scared
of being hurt again, u've done so much for the person and
lookin' back u think to urself was it worth it then?

(Course)
Was it worth it? givin' them ur love wen they didn't deserve it
Was it worth it? goin' through all of the hurt and
Was it worth it? cause' they took ur love and cursed it
You'll never love again like ya first did so was it worth it?

(Verse 2)
For a year and 4 months I've showed nothing but patients
But now I'm tired of waiting, for u to change and, enough of my time has been wasted,
now I'ma look back on that year n 4 months and do my best to try to retrace it
Now I'm gonna state the facts, this time I won't take ya back
I will let u go, I'm determined, so show me respect cause' I've earned it
so lets just put an end to are relations, cause' I'm starting to get impatient
of pacing back and forth constantly debating, on whether or not I should leave u,
I've made up my mind and I don't need u, and all I can think is

(Course)
Was it worth it? givin' u my love wen u didn't deserve it
Was it worth it? goin' through all of the hurt and
Was it worth it? cause' u took my love and cursed it
I'll never love again like I first did so was it worth it?

(Verse 3)
It wasn't love u were soked wit lust, I trusted u and u broke the trust
u left me smoked in dust, so I smoke the duch
tryin' to put an end to us, I thought u knew wat it meant to love
but appearently u only knew wat it meant to lust
now I'm left wit no1 I ain't even got a friend to trust
u didn't think I'd get too far, when u left me here wit a broken heart
but I got farther then u ever expected me to get, just know that
I'm forever affected by ur neglect and now I know that

(Course)
It wasn't worth it givin' u my love when u didn't deserve it
It wasn't worth it goin' though all of the hurt and
It wasn't worth it cause' u took my love and cursed it
I'll never love again like I first did it wasn't worth it
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Postby kait » May 21st, '06, 03:56

I like it! I like your message, but you spelled some of the words incorrectly. Other than that, it's a pretty good poem. Good Job! :)
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Postby neha » May 21st, '06, 13:09

good job :happy:
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