All the same, fuck it.

[Gummybur]

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Just needed to vent about a few events that happened a year back. I'll edit it and work on the flow..so everyone knows It's my first song I'm writing to fit in a beat aside from just writing words down.



I'm a dic-

I'm a dic-

Another dick did you bitch? Well bend over

let me see that behind, behind my life you are

you seen me lie, and cry outside ya car

drove me down, smashed this heart into the fuckin' ground

harriet tubman couldn't rail my motherfuckin' ass back out

im out im leavin, only took the sound of the pussy queefin everytime we fucked

pinky, index, ring, and thumb, say hello to my fuck you gun

chewed abc before now its your fuckin gum

chew that crap before i get you to cut your self again

fuck you god, don't repent this sin ill go to hell for the hell of it

you're a crock of shit, even betty told me you're fuckin full of it

I hope you enjoy your fucking new mate,

a blind fucking calender wouldn't go on a date with you

since you fucked him and all this shit is true

look in my big blues, and get a fuckin' clue

this is just me, breaking the fuck up with you.

[Slim Fiasco]

Again man, I can't really judge your work since you're just a beginner. I can only applaud you for the frequency of your writing, and the attempt to write to a beat. My advice in general, is to read the How To Rap Book (http://www.amazon.com/How-Rap-Art-Scien ... 1556528167) and read lyrics of rap songs on RapGenius (http://rapgenius.com/). This way you'll get an insight of wordplay, rhyming, similes, metaphors, personification etc. Which are figures of speech that can aid your writing and vastly improve your ideas in general. You can also check this blog out - http://rappingmanual.com/?cat=74&paged=3