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Geno ft. D. Dubs - Rhyming

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Re: Geno ft. D. Dubs - Rhyming

Postby mdemaz » Jul 1st, '12, 06:40

Good one, riveting, thought-provoking, dark, funny and structured well.

Good chemistry, Dubs is serious and dark and Geno is goofy.

I can't think of anything to criticize other than Geno's verses being a bit random and confusing sometimes, but I didn't get a lot of the jokes, though.
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Re: Geno ft. D. Dubs - Rhyming

Postby Emadyville » Jul 2nd, '12, 05:39

thanks for the feedback guys, means a lot since I havent been writing much, and rhyming was my whole life for so many years. thanks again, cant say how much it means even though its just a written :worship:
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