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Rhyme I wrote in work last night (Was bored, it`s unfinished

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Rhyme I wrote in work last night (Was bored, it`s unfinished

Postby 4D » May 30th, '06, 19:38

This job get`s so borin` I`m snorin from time to time,
I need to escape & create, so it`s time to write a rhyme.
It`s a crime my prime is wasted operatin`press machines
But, I`m alright, in life`s strife, there`s more depressin things
The murder that aggression brings, destroys local families
And murder`s cat, but, worse than that, there`s global tragedies,
Coastal casualties & total fatalities on a biblical scale
Critics and cynics prevail, on the news we view the typical tales
From media slease, famine, death, disease, destruction
Greed is function as they gain from the pain n breed dysfunction,
On the surface they provide a service to serve us information
We`re info nympho`s and now with the net, there`s no limitation
If you`re lookin for fun / happy stuff or some stupid brutal shit
There`s nothing too putrid that you can`t yahoo or google it
Wedding or funeral pics, humourous vids or Chuck Norris facts,
Or if you`re prone to porn, the internet truck`s got it stacked.
Fuck, what is that?!! That`s a shemale, I`ll spare the sordid details
It`s sick aas fuck, a dick thats stuck 1 nip n tuck short of female
Assorted e-mails, some friends and fam, most spam for deletion
Gotta go now break time, say bye Fordie and thanks for preachin.
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Postby Tomega » May 30th, '06, 20:38

u must be really bored at work to make you think of things like that...
lol

anyways, i like your rhyme
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Postby walend » May 30th, '06, 20:59

yhea it's good, try to spit it on a good beat !

I remember me also writin rhymes at work on a machine, hehe
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Postby Tomega » May 31st, '06, 07:07

walend wrote:yhea it's good, try to spit it on a good beat !

I remember me also writin rhymes at work on a machine, hehe


im still working on a machine and im rhyming in my head when im working..
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Postby 4D » May 31st, '06, 08:25

Haha, hood to hear we`re on the same wave length!!

Write them down if you can find the time and post them here.

I`m busy as fuck sometimes, but, i work harder so that i`ve time to write them out.
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Postby 4D » Jun 1st, '06, 09:39

Thanks a lot, it`s great to hear stuff like that!! :)


I wrote one last night, i`ll post it if i stop being too lazy to type it! :D
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