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Postby Infliction » May 31st, '06, 21:12

Yo, I spit hot fire, flames burnin' inside me rise high when I desire
I'll spin ya world upside down like a dryer, I aint a liar
I'm ready to diminish ya and finish ya, iss how I roll
I cant think straight I smoked too much troll
Fuckin' leprachaun came in my house, my money he stole
I said "Wait bitch gimme back my fuckin' money!"
He turned around, gave me the finger, laughed, he thought dis was funny
So I grabbed him by his big ears, and tossed him on the ground
Thats when he let out a scream, a fuckin terrible sound
I Fell down beside him, holdin my ears, this fuckin troll, I swear he's hell bound
Once my ears stopped ringin' I got up and ran after him
He turned around they lucky charms in my face, spat on me and gave me a napkin
I ate the lucky charms, I had the munchies I was snackin
Then i followed him thru a dark room, the door closed, heard the locks clackin
I was all alone in dis pitch black room, started panic attackin'
This fuckin irish bastard! I'll cut his fuckin balls off!
"GIMME BACK MY MONEY YOU LITTLE PIECE OF SHIT! AND LET ME OUT THIS ROOM FUCK!" I angrily spit
I heard a loud cackle then felt my face get hit
I fell to the ground, he took my throat and slit
That's when I woke up, in my bed all sweaty
"I'm never smokin that chronic again, my mind aint ready!"
I tried to get up and walk steady, but I fell and hit my head, another dream on the way
I woke up in a weird place, a little green man far away
"Fuck!" I yelled loud, I tried to run but in the same place I stayed
I dropped to my knees, stared to the sky and prayed
"Dont let him kill me lord, I promise I'll live right."
That's wen leppy stood over me wit a knife, He whispered in my ear "Goodnight"
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Postby 4D » May 31st, '06, 22:46

Plaspp, that was hot man, top notch imagery!

You can work on your wordplay and complexity, but, you`ve got the basics down. Good flow, but, the story aspect was cool aas fuck. PROPS!!

P.s Am i the Irish fuck you`re terrified of? :p

P.s.s Check out the Cyphers, they`d suit you`re style of writing!
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Postby Infliction » Jun 1st, '06, 10:01

FORDIE wrote:Plaspp, that was hot man, top notch imagery!

You can work on your wordplay and complexity, but, you`ve got the basics down. Good flow, but, the story aspect was cool aas fuck. PROPS!!

P.s Am i the Irish fuck you`re terrified of? :p

P.s.s Check out the Cyphers, they`d suit you`re style of writing!




Lmao funny thing, i was actually gonna have the leprachaun turn around and be like "Oh shit its fordie!" as a joke, but i couldnt work it in :p

Wat are the cyphers?
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