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Stand Back (2 Verse Song)

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Re: Stand Back (2 Verse Song)

Postby Evil Twin » Mar 9th, '13, 02:32

CanadaPure wrote:None of your rhyming felt forced to me, the whole thing was decently written. The only think I'd liked to have seen was a beat posted with it, it just makes it easy to feel how you were flowing on it. Really good for your first time trying to go all out on it though, quality stuff.


Thanks. I appreciate your words

Any tips on anything you guys think I need to work on?
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We're gonna rock this house until we knock it down
So turn the volume loud, cause it's mayhem 'til the a.m.
So baby make just like K-Fed and let yourself go, let yourself go
Say fuck it before we kick the bucket
Life's too short to not go for broke

Go Berzerk!
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