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What It's Been

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What It's Been

Postby Rain Matrix » Feb 6th, '07, 05:50

I can Taste tha Tears of tha Wasted Years. life is but a Dream,
I'm still down 4 my Team, my world isn't Serene,
u might know what I Mean, if u want 2 Scream,
at tha Scenes u've Seen, I know it's neva what it Seems
fuck tha drama spark tha Green,
keep tha Fakes Away, or tha Hate will Stay
2gether we can Create a Day, if it's 2 Late 2 Convey or Relay,
we all Wait 2 Say
Reveal what u Chose, Steal tha Show, Feel tha Opposed,
Heal what we think we Know, and when tha Deal with Those, keep instinct Real Close, Learn their Pretend, who knows on what Terms it Ends,
I'll Send a Concern, mc Friends can Turn,
u cannot Bend tha Firm so Surrender
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Postby randomghost » Feb 7th, '07, 10:22

i liked the flow, but u got the word play, good work
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Postby Global » Feb 7th, '07, 10:23

randomghost wrote:i liked the flow, but u got the word play, good work
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“Some people tell me that we professional players are soccer slaves. Well, if this is slavery, give me a life sentence.” - Bobby Charlton

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