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well i just wrote this

Postby stevethetruth » Apr 25th, '07, 05:14

i might try to record it tomorrow, if not tomorrow then thursday

lol idk why i'm posting maybe cause i'm bored lol


My life completely changed when I met you
You just appeared out of thin air from the blue
No matter what happened you always stayed around
To have fun joke and kid as we always did but now
You
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Postby stevethetruth » Apr 26th, '07, 02:59

thanks a lot :D

i got it audioed too in the audio stage if your interested it's called move on
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Postby stevethetruth » Apr 29th, '07, 19:31

buzz up
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Postby Hadez » Apr 29th, '07, 21:03

"crazed" is used by wayyy too many people in my opinion.

other than that it was good, props keep it up. :flower:
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