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9/11 rhymes

Postby Emadyville » Sep 12th, '08, 06:44

An evil plan done by two or more persons,
In secret, like locked doors and closed curtains,
That’s a conspiracy, the definitional version,
America’s history has one major that’s worse-than,
The truth of 9-11 has theorists starting to curse-them,
Because of excursions from the truth into perversion,
The attacks that day can bring you back to ways,
Pearl Harbor moved the world farther back it strays,
We were lied to because of all they did and tried to,
I’ll start in New York where the planes did collide through,
Both twin towers, falling cement in showers,
All I have lent to consent is to repent these cowards,
The first and most obvious leaves some in awe,
The flash before each plane hit is what we saw,
Can it be explained how a plane shines light,
It’s insane my brain can’t contain my eyes sight,
Was it an explosion, maybe that’s why erosion,
And corrosion explains why cement started blowin’,
When they collapsed, but first let’s relapse back,
To the whack facts they gave us that’s packed,
They thought they’d get fools to believe it was jet fuel,
That melted steal now they’re starting to sweat pools,
Because it cannot be done, I hope you’re starting to see some,
Distorted facts because I’ve resorted back to freedom,
But let’s switch it from the morning to the evening,
3,000 just died so now we’re mourning and healing,
But it’s not done, more nonsense, here’s a good-hint,
Building 7 like the towers collapses into its footprint,
I’ll do a calculation to turn this to an explanation,
Maybe this is Bush turning us into a Texas-nation,
He was reading in Florida, a children’s book,
He was calm when at the time there were millions shook,
Like the buildings shook, they watch and as civilians took,
In the devastation, Bush sits with a villains look,
And soon after, now it’s closer to noon laughter,
Is nowhere they go near DC for a new chapter,
Now it’s not just the city, the Pentagon is attacked,
We can’t adapt, we’re trapped, the government attracts,
A plane that flew so low it took out light poles,
Over the highway and by Friday the sights closed,
Only one taped released and no plane is noticed,
The government stole the others just to close-this,
They claim that before it hit it brushed the front lawn,
It flew that low people could have rushed to jump on,
But there’s no marks this quickly sparks conspiracy,
Because suddenly facts begin to depart sparingly,
And the pilot did maneuvers that even professionals,
Couldn’t pull off, so suddenly we’re skeptical,
A 270 degree turn that cannot be determined,
Why it was done so I guess we’re learning,
The facts are flawed, you can scratch and claw,
Again you’re back to awe, because this lacks the law,
Did you see the television and live feed back,
Youtube it, cause you dudes get to read that,
Watch it, hear them say it well over fifty times,
“I heard explosions” these aren’t just nifty rhymes,
Why would people there in NYC,
Lie on live tv, about what they’re eyes-see,
And what they heard it’s absurd they have the nerve,
I just hope these words can make you give what’s deserved,
We need more whistleblowers until this is over,
Mission accomplished? When’s this mission over?
I guess Bush did envision soldiers,
Looking over their shoulders in Iraq sittin’ in rovers,
Fighting for their lives, dying for his pride,
While those who know the truth are dying inside,
It seems 9-11 was a precedent the President set up,
But the residents aren’t done with evidence to let up,
It’s evident Bush thought the plan was excellent to set up,
But we cannot on this subject be negligent so get up,
This subject is out to the public’s interpretation,
Don’t convert to patience,
We need now to show the world how they worked a nation…
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Re: 9/11 rhymes

Postby SajN » Sep 12th, '08, 16:42

Damn :worship:

I liked it!
Great multies and rhymes :y:

I liked the content.. I'm not pretty sure on what I should believe in.. conspiracy or real attack...

You had some great lines too.

Keep it up!
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Re: 9/11 rhymes

Postby Emadyville » Sep 12th, '08, 17:40

Thanks man, I wrote this in an hour and half, was like 6-7 months ago. I was asked by a high school teacher to write a song about an historical event, so I wrote about what I knew. Yeah I mean I just tried to cover the basics of some of the conspiracy shit and my anger at bush, but i liked it. Thanks again.
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Re: 9/11 rhymes

Postby Slim Zaddy » Sep 14th, '08, 13:36

man , this is so hot .. i liked it . it's pretty cool .. flow , multies are just great .. keep it up bro :y:
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Re: 9/11 rhymes

Postby Emadyville » Sep 14th, '08, 17:18

z_em wrote:man , this is so hot .. i liked it . it's pretty cool .. flow , multies are just great .. keep it up bro :y:


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Re: 9/11 rhymes

Postby Wallace » Sep 16th, '08, 15:15

What the fuck :o
That was so good and well-written. If I would rhyme like this I would get rid of school and start a career. :p
You should record. :b:
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Re: 9/11 rhymes

Postby Emadyville » Sep 16th, '08, 18:45

Wallace wrote:What the fuck :o
That was so good and well-written. If I would rhyme like this I would get rid of school and start a career. :p
You should record. :b:

Thank you. And I do record.
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