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Will I Ever?

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Will I Ever?

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 18th, '08, 03:22

presently the unpleasant pressure depresses me from progressing, upsetting me but i'll be better
in a sec you'll see, i am set, i'll never settle, my self esteem has stress but i'll get it together

i have left the flee and now i live in a kennel, will i ever
free my head from these little things i'm fed by the Devil?

well it seems i aint given a medal when i was sent battling, still i sit in a hell hole, unwelcoming
i'm an outcast who shifts with the shadows, how can i pivot step at all? forever remember me

my past broadcasts on a channel and magazines cuz my masterpiece you picture's not fragile




flee - the frontlines during War
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Will I Ever?

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 19th, '08, 19:45

Damn man, that was dope! Loved the rhyme-scheme for you, the flow was cool, kinda like poetry the way I read it. The lyrics were just straight sick, feelin' the deepness in them.

Good drop man, one of your best.
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Re: Will I Ever?

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 19th, '08, 20:10

every drop is another journey u definitly captivate yur audience - :y: :y:
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Re: Will I Ever?

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 20th, '08, 03:48

it's great to hear that coming from you guys, i will keep rapping until i lose my skills... just wait til i get more time to write and sorry for not recording anything yet, thats cuz i got myself into some troubles... i may get to record mid-november... *fingers crossed*
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