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i just cant

Postby shadyallday » Oct 21st, '08, 17:49

i want u off my mind, but i see u all the time/
girl u more than fine/ i wouldnt say ur gorgeous but ur on the border line/
i think i'll need more than a sign, i love when u lick the oreo's, i'm/
still pissed u act like a whore all the time/
when i met u, that was more of a line, i just wanted in ur pants and u wanted in mine/ i should of took it as a warning sign/
i should of known better than to get mixed up with u, get fixed up, and then after 6 months were through/ see what this shits coming to, i wanna forget u but i still feel that i'm in love with u?

girl i thought we ended it mutually/
what more do u want u have no future with me/
i dont wanna date u exclusively, only if u go back to the way u used to be/
damn its crazy how much i've been thinking of u baby/ i hate u more than u hate me/ is that why u've been ignorin me lately?/
cause i didnt buy u that adorable painting?/
cause i dont get turned on when ur naked?/
cause when i say come on when ur fakin?/
and i give u more penetration, just to shut u up cause i swear u get more irritating/ everyday, but we're not dating anyway/
stop callin me up/
i dont want a relationship, i dont wanna do more than just fuck/
i dont wanny marry, u cause if u eave i gotta cough up some bucks/
so just leave me alone, i cant stand those messages u leave on my phone/
u miss me and u dont wanna be sleepin alone/when i see that smile i cant say no, i dont want u to go/

remember when i used to buy u flowers and chocolate/
we would stay up all night, sit for hours just talkin/
u sayin u wish we could have a family one day, dont even think about marriage okay, i dont wanna say this in a disparaging way/
but when i took ur number i said i might call ya/
u assumed that u were my soul mate or my life partner/
i must have been crazy to decide to fight for ya/
when u got naked and took out the camcorder/
i was like look at what ur man bought ya/
why am i putting up with this torture/
i wanna go but i cant escape, i think i'm ready to set a date/
why do i keep coming back i must be a mental case/

tell me what u think...
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Re: i just cant

Postby Slim Zaddy » Oct 22nd, '08, 19:25

i think i liked it .. keep going :y:
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