One Word to Describe...

[Ka0t1c]

wow, you have much improved! keep it up, i see there's something good going on for your future

[Emadyville]

wow, you have much improved! keep it up, i see there's something good going on for your future

Thank you man appreciate it, much improved ?!? lol i've always wrote the sick rhymes lol but yeah i think was above my normal shit, thanks again

[Arabian Shady]

i think you stepped it up from the first verse, i kinda found the flow for this one even better than the first, it got some sick lines in there man,
i like your concepts man , different topics, different flows
your shit's makin me wana start writin but i have to study for ma midterms so... maybe wen i'm bak on track i'ma ask you for a collabo or sumthing , if you aint busy to entertain us little folks lol
keep that sick shit up man, its wiked

[Emadyville]

Thank you man, I appreciate you feeding it again, and I'm always down for collabs.

[Slim Zaddy]

man that's was a piece of good written shit ,, i always like your rhyming ,, keep it up bro ,. u do have a future .

[Emadyville]

man that's was a piece of good written shit ,, i always like your rhyming ,, keep it up bro ,. u do have a future .

Thanks a lot bro

[Emadyville]

Bumpin it cause I added the final verse, feedback please

[mcZu]

Sick last verse, liked how you put in questions and answered them while still remaining on topic and rhyming. Nice done, you better record this song Look for a sick beat that kinda builds up the flow an delivery ( something like ''one mic'' )... I can't wait to hear this

[Emadyville]

Sick last verse, liked how you put in questions and answered them while still remaining on topic and rhyming. Nice done, you better record this song Look for a sick beat that kinda builds up the flow an delivery ( something like ''one mic'' )... I can't wait to hear this

Thank you, I might look to put this on my next album so it would be awhile until I record it, thanks for the feed

[James R.]

That was ill. The vocabulary was outstanding. The rhyming was outstanding because of it. That was the perfect example of how much you can say when you can articulate your thoughts into words. The concept was great. The delivery was great. The flow was definitely solid. It was very easy to read. Trshady classic.

[Emadyville]

That was ill. The vocabulary was outstanding. The rhyming was outstanding because of it. That was the perfect example of how much you can say when you can articulate your thoughts into words. The concept was great. The delivery was great. The flow was definitely solid. It was very easy to read. Trshady classic.

Damn, Thanks for the feed, greatly appreciated bro

[Slim Zaddy]

i guess there's no need for the feedback for the last vesrse ,, cuz it's perfect .. record this if u can cuz it's hot .. gd luck pal

[SajN]

That was sick!
2nd verse is the verse I liked most, but the two others were sick too!
Great multies and rhymes, but most of all the emotions in the lyrics!
Sick job!

[Emadyville]

That was sick!
2nd verse is the verse I liked most, but the two others were sick too!
Great multies and rhymes, but most of all the emotions in the lyrics!
Sick job!

Thanks for checking it out man, feedback was appreciated