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Re: Ridge Racer!!!

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 9th, '08, 20:53

This was a very unusual write...
It seemed to me like you were just writing random stuff lol. It's still a good write nonetheless
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Ridge Racer!!!

Postby Solace » Nov 9th, '08, 20:57

That was uh...unique...

Yeah it was good tho, i enjoyed it lol

:y: Nothing lyrical or amazing but i give 7/10
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Re: Ridge Racer!!!

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 9th, '08, 20:58

Chet Starr wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:This was a very unusual write...
It seemed to me like you were just writing random stuff lol. It's still a good write nonetheless

Your right on both parts...I'm a weird writer and I wanted something random lol

Thanks :smoking:

You're welcome bro! :8)
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Re: Ridge Racer!!!

Postby Robbie G » Nov 9th, '08, 21:10

good stuff, unique rhyme scheme. :y:
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Re: Ridge Racer!!!

Postby mcZu » Nov 9th, '08, 21:37

Liked the rhyme pattern you used, good shit :y:
Enjoyed reading it :b:
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Re: Ridge Racer!!!

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 10th, '08, 23:04

Haha, good read dude. Deffinetly had some funny lines, so it kept me well entertained. I shall smoke a bowl for you, lmao.

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