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Euphrates Flow

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 13th, '08, 20:18

If I don't respond right away it's because my parents didn't pay the cable bill..lol
I'm posting this from my school. Anyway I hope you enjoy this. :happy:

When I grab the mic it dissolves to liquid metal
when I touch a pencil it dissintergrates into pebbles
spittin' with a fire hot enough to sunburn the sun
spittin' rhymes so quickly like my mouth was a gun
spittin' with a velocity faster then a S7
my rhymebook so poisonous it can taint heaven
thought process so reckless, eatin' dictionaries for breakfast
lookin' at my checklist, then swiped your credit, now your check less
inspect this, and the karma radiation will blind your optic fibers
this subject matter burns like topic fires
objects scatter when telekenesis sees this thesis
such as letters, matter, deceises, and puzzle pieces
all found within the thin boundries of my lyrical quality
the hounds see residue of LSD in mystical quantities
they tried to attack me, and I punched their chest till' it turned transparent
then I got in their face and spit fire until the burns were apparent
I punched in their foreheads to cause mental blocks
put the gat in their mouth, I just invented the first dental sock
sprayed the chamber until I could see the ground clearly
then I started freestyling so hard that even sound feared me
I pound yearly, daily, every fucking moment of life
like the grim reaper, I start sucking moments with sythes
breaking omens with strife, lyricly massacring beats
the gigantic mass occuring feat is to be the one to be beat
kicking a rhyme so hard the impact caused hiroshima
and when I kick another one, you will see no creatures
spittin' with a heat so intense, it crystalizes sand
my rhymes stimulate the imagination so bad,
when you close your eyes it materializes land
What I hold in my hand generates golden symphonies
X-Ray vision allows me to see real niggas, and these phonies
I throw my opponents into a watery grave like the Titanic
with a stern look so strong, I can see when your eyes panic
rappin' with a force equivilant to nothing on this globe
spittin' with rhymes so amazing it causes orgasims around your earlobes
leaving secret encryptions in my lyrics, the FBI tried to crack it
when they touched it they turned to dust for tryin' to track it
nobody will decode the lyrical heiroglyphics, they're to prolific
more rhymes to spit from the atlantic to the pacific
to the artic, and all the way to the mediterrianian sea
plus I got more green then a vegitarian tea
A humantarian plea asks me to stop murdering MC's
I reply ''I would advise you not to motherfuckin' tempt me''
an arsenal of weaponry at my disposal to execute
with the lethal rhymes on point like a texan boot
weaving through wackness with the golden microphone
and I don't hear MC's who speak in micro tones
like computers these MC's are micro''soft''
small enough to blow them away with one of my coughs
I'm hard like erections, for perfection there's no need for corrections
I already gain all the votes, I don't need the elections.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Euphrates Flow

Postby Emadyville » Nov 13th, '08, 20:33

It reminded me exactly of the other one you posted, it was just a rehash of that verse, but I definitely still enjoyed it and was impressed, I think your other one was better but this is still pretty damn good :y:
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Re: Euphrates Flow

Postby gladimnotsoluble » Nov 13th, '08, 21:19

It was pretty good, the first two lines were sick

Make sure you get enough multies in there, nice job though
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Re: Euphrates Flow

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 13th, '08, 22:49

ya it was nice ,, flow was nice ,, lyrics and rhymes are good .. but it was 2 long i guess.... anyway :y:
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Re: Euphrates Flow

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 14th, '08, 03:54

pretty good man, you have unique talent :y: :y: but i see u still need some improving as well
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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