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Freestyle

Postby lilrossy » Dec 2nd, '08, 19:24

yeah im only in training but don't underestimate,
ima takeover & rule like alexander the great,
ive been writin rhymes 4 years, lying in wait,
now ive cum to tie this game up like a figure of 8,
got da tightest flow on da planet, when i blow ya panic,
tempers volcanic, ima an ice burg, uze the titanic,
im quik & satanic, when i spit ur estatic,
try ta catch ya breathe like a fucin asthmatic,
i'll put u in state bitch, of desperate straits,
like another plane hit the towers in the united states,
cuz my lyrics so hot, that what i spit evaporates,
even the devil was sarred when i said lets collaborate,
this fucin rap game, bitch ima master it,
ima blow ya's to ya's caskets, leave uze up 'n' platered,
so don't put ur ass in my path cuz ima blast it,
im one of the greatest, i can't be touched like battery acid.

pretty shit, but i was bored so i felt like postin a freestyle.
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
-Copywrite
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Re: Freestyle

Postby Solace » Dec 2nd, '08, 23:00

I thought it was pretty ill, the beginning could have been 10x better if you used multies, but the rest was pretty nice!

i liked these most:

"try ta catch ya breathe like a fucin asthmatic,"

"cuz my lyrics so hot, that what i spit evaporates,
even the devil was sarred when i said lets collaborate,"

Keep it up! :smoking:
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Re: Freestyle

Postby James R. » Dec 3rd, '08, 01:20

Not bad man. Flowed well. Rhymed well especially once you got past the 1st 4-8 bars you kinda turned it up a notch. What I wanna see is that notch become your main skill level. I know you can do it. Then just keep turning it up from there. Keep dropping man. You'll keep gettin better.
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Re: Freestyle

Postby lilrossy » Dec 3rd, '08, 05:16

thanks alot guys, appreciate all the feedbak. i didn't think it was dat good, so im glad u liked it. good lookin out fellas. :y:
"Too fatal, unable to crash
Sluts I introduce to anal call me a pain in the ass"
"Got hoes suspicious. Even one peg leg bitches
After I came, fucked em with they own leg
They ain't know the difference"
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