NEW - Fear

[Solace]

[Verse 1]
Have you ever gone to school, ready to get beat up?
Expecting to stand up for yourself, instead your retreating,
Got people 2 years older than me attacking me for fun,
Sometimes I want a gun, it's over and i'm done,
So you get shunned, walk around with a black eye,
Mortified, people pointing and yelling, GET THAT GUY!
Who got beat up, but now hes afraid to talk,
Every corner he looks, his own school he's afraid to walk,
He's in danger every block, every minute hes alone,
Only relieved when he reaches his own home.

[Chorus x2]
Have you ever been afraid of people,
Ever been afraid when you dont need to?
It comes 365 times a year,
And it's got a name, I usually call it fear.

[Verse 2]
Pissed off angry, only got 1 friend who he will hang with,
His self esteem is dangling, and all he can hear is banging,
He notices it's just his head against the brink wall,
Wishing he was dead, wishing someone would end it all,
Some names he would get called, like Pussy & Lightweight,
He never asked for a fight, so why is he fighting?
It's frightening, why would they do such a thing,
Just for fun, to punch and make him bleed,
As he walks home, it trickles down his cheek, a tear,
Wondering what'll happen tommorow, it's all fear.

[Chorus x2]

[Robbie G]

That was really good, well written and meaningful.

[Solace]

That was really good, well written and meaningful.

A comment already =D Thanks a lot Glad you think it's good

[Requiem]

content and flow was great, but the rhyming wasn't there as good as ur other pieces. i enjoyed it tho
7/10, better than alot of stuff in creative writing these days. besides MC

[Solace]

content and flow was great, but the rhyming wasn't there as good as ur other pieces. i enjoyed it tho
7/10, better than alot of stuff in creative writing these days. besides MC

Thanks, glad you liked it, i dont get what you mean rhyming wasnt there compared to other pieces tho

[lilrossy]

yeah man, good drop. i really injoyed readin it. i like the second verse betta, & the chorus was well constructed too. overall, good work, keep it up.

[Requiem]

content and flow was great, but the rhyming wasn't there as good as ur other pieces. i enjoyed it tho
7/10, better than alot of stuff in creative writing these days. besides MC

Thanks, glad you liked it, i dont get what you mean rhyming wasnt there compared to other pieces tho

u ended the second line with "retreating" which doesn't rhyme with "getting beat up"
and ur lines tend to have double rhymes, which can throw off the flow somewhat. other than that......
i guess u did rhyme more than i remembered. lmao, i'm in the middle of making a beat. i'm not concentrating that well

[Solace]

content and flow was great, but the rhyming wasn't there as good as ur other pieces. i enjoyed it tho
7/10, better than alot of stuff in creative writing these days. besides MC

Thanks, glad you liked it, i dont get what you mean rhyming wasnt there compared to other pieces tho

u ended the second line with "retreating" which doesn't rhyme with "getting beat up"
and ur lines tend to have double rhymes, which can throw off the flow somewhat. other than that......
i guess u did rhyme more than i remembered. lmao, i'm in the middle of making a beat. i'm not concentrating that well

'Retreating' and 'beat up' rhyme in my opinion, if you pronounce "retreating" like "retreatun". My flows fine the way i flow to it, so i cant blame you on that since we all flow in different ways. Anyways, thanks

@lilrossy, thanks man, glad you liked it and thought it was nice

[Requiem]

sry if this is off topic, but chet is that ur new album in ur sig???

[Ka0t1c]

it's not bad, but not great either, it's just good enough

and does that mean "brick wall" ?

[Rain Matrix]

I am that kid but I am many other kids as well... you can't save us all
good drop PLAYA!

[Slim Zaddy]

nice drop from ya , not your best for sure .. but it's good ..

[Solace]

Thanks all of you, and yes I did mean "brick" wall, sorry for the mistake.

[mcZu]

Great job bro, great message, rhymes were ok
flow was nice, overall a good piece

[Solace]

Great job bro, great message, rhymes were ok
flow was nice, overall a good piece

Thanks