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Identity Fraud

Postby Kez » Dec 18th, '08, 22:29

Little concept i thought of and ran with.

My writings are like a scripture, hidden under lock and key/
So if anybody wants to battle me, they cannot fuck with me/
I keep my lyrics secret, so they can't predict the punches, see/
But suddenly i get on one day, what do i fucking see?/
Everything is gone, all because of my computer crashing/
Allowing someone else to grab a mic, so you could do the bashing/
Of egos, of emos, of greebos and faggots/
Of re-throws of these old weak flows, and that is/
What pisses me off, it's like having your vocal chords ripped/
Now my medium's been destroyed, so looks like there's nothing for it/
I'm gonna have to transmit this shit to a written form, shit/
It's almost as though i've been a victim of identity fraud, bitch!/
It's like a scribe being overworked, and not getting paid/
Me having no sound's equivalent to Scott not getting laid/
It's his life, he doesn't care about anything else, consumes his frigging time/
And now it's all just been destroyed, which is shite!
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Re: Identity Fraud

Postby Solace » Dec 19th, '08, 00:41

I liked it, not sure why no ones commented on it yet, cause it was good. Flow was good, vocab was alright, i liked these lines best:

My writings are like a scripture, hidden under lock and key/

Me having no sound's equivalent to Scott not getting laid/
^^ :worship:
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Re: Identity Fraud

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 19th, '08, 01:41

This was pretty damn good Kez.
Good fuckin' job LMAO, made me laugh, especially the Scott punch. :worship:
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Re: Identity Fraud

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 19th, '08, 02:32

i agree, i just don't like the last word u used "shite"
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Identity Fraud

Postby Rain Matrix » Dec 19th, '08, 03:25

not bad at all, I haven't seen a lot of your work but this isn't half bad :y:
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Re: Identity Fraud

Postby James R. » Dec 20th, '08, 00:23

Anyone taking a shot at Scott MacDouchal gets a 10/10 in my book. But past that I liked it. Another good piece from the Kez. Flow was the best part of these (save the scott diss). Everything was on point.
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Re: Identity Fraud

Postby Kez » Dec 20th, '08, 00:32

Kaotic wrote:i agree, i just don't like the last word u used "shite"


Sorry but i have to keep it UK :toocool:

Thanks for those who left feed, anyway
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Re: Identity Fraud

Postby Ice_Scarred » Dec 21st, '08, 02:51

Completely dope dude. Keep it up bro!
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