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Re: Fuck Me (Feat. Scott Macdougall) FINISHED

Postby Arabian Shady » Dec 19th, '08, 20:31

gaylords? lmao j/k :p

its a wierd thing to be writing on, dont you think
your shits humour, but gay humour??? :confusion:

just a thought,
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Re: Fuck Me (Feat. Scott Macdougall) FINISHED

Postby James R. » Dec 20th, '08, 00:37

Shit was whack. It was catchy I guess, it was EXTREMELY gay, but overall while it was kinda funny everything was "kind of". Nothing was like OMG HAHAHA THAT WAS FUNNY! Or OMG THAT WAS DOPE! It was like "oh, possibly fictitious religious icon, this is quite average." And seeing as how songs like this are whack even when they're funny, this (being only funnyish) was whack. Try harder next time guys.
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Re: Fuck Me (Feat. Scott Macdougall) FINISHED

Postby Solace » Dec 20th, '08, 01:52

"Try harder"?

We didnt try at all. Thanks for the posts, but dont take this serious at all, i just did a random fack freestyle, and slightly fixed up structure.
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Re: Fuck Me (Feat. Scott Macdougall) FINISHED

Postby James R. » Dec 20th, '08, 01:56

I know you didn't take it seriously. If you had there'd be a problem. I'm just saying it wasn't funny, and since that's what you were going for try harder or try at all next time to accomplish your task. And using Fack as any type of inspiration for anything aside from suicide should result in a ban ;)
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Re: Fuck Me (Feat. Scott Macdougall) FINISHED

Postby Solace » Dec 20th, '08, 02:04

LOL^ okay i guess i see what your saying, next time i try to do something gay and funny, ill try harder i guess.
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Re: Fuck Me (Feat. Scott Macdougall) FINISHED

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Dec 21st, '08, 02:58

This is so gay that I creamed my pants .003 seconds after my eyes made contact with the screen.
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Re: Fuck Me (Feat. Scott Macdougall) FINISHED

Postby Solace » Dec 21st, '08, 03:11

Cwayon_Murder wrote:This is so gay that I creamed my pants .003 seconds after my eyes made contact with the screen.

No way same here!
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