No One Listen To My Words ( N-E-W ) Verse 2 Added

[Slim Zaddy]

feedback would be much appreciated guys .. i'm thinking of making anther verse .. but first tell me what do you think of this one


(verse 1)

No one listens to my words, why am I lyrically unheard,
I know I have much to learn, but why has this negligence occured?
Battle talent is unnoticed, no matter what form of dopeness is posted,
Vets shows care then bold it, say ur wicked now, there's still much hope kid,
I know I'm being realistic, frustrated tryin to forget the statistics,
Aint tryin to be egotistic, jus want respect for my linguistics,
Voice my opinion but no one hears, overshadowed by my peers,
Attention I have to commandeer, Recognition doesn't seem near,
On this site I'm the minority, this underrated title won't let go of me,
Gotta straighten out my priorities, try and work to gain seniority,
Everyone has had this feeling, loss and hope jus interweaving,
Screening ability for no reason, leaving no room for tru meaning,
Try hard to make my rhymes glisten, Dun respect then skills ya missin,
Wishin the elite would jus stop dissin, I speak but No one listens,...

verse (2)

So much to say but no one to hear.. its crystal clear,
How can I voice my fear when there’s no one to hear,
It’s like a one handed clap.. the atmosphere ready to snap,
Real shit is drowned beneath so much fabricated crap,
And the noise is too much to bear.. my soul is bared,
But no one stops to listen and no one even cares,
Why would they when I show no care.. makes sense,
My existence is hollow yet my thoughts are dense,
My mind screams at me and looks for a means of escape,
But I cant provide it.. when my mouth is sealed and taped,
So I stop to look around at my contemporaries.. Jeez!
Why would they listen when I turn a deaf ear to their pleas?
Waves of frustration transcend my fingers.. it must be written,
So I stick with typing.. cos its clear that No One Listens,

hope you like it though ,, nd plz guys i'm dissn nobody here ,, it's just an opinion though , i hope you will like verse 2. ..

[Ka0t1c]

not bad, it is the best one i seen from you as far as i can remember, keep doing shit like that then you're bound to get recognized

[Kez]

Vets write hate and then bold it, say quit now, there's still no hope kid,

Bad move. There aren't many vets, meaning you'll piss the few of us off. I'll let it slide for now.

I thought the lyrics were actually pretty sick if you take out the Vet dissing part. The flow needs work cause it don't flow natural, but the writing it pretty superb.

[MC Anonymous]

Vets write hate and then bold it, say quit now, there's still no hope kid,

Bad move. There aren't many vets, meaning you'll piss the few of us off. I'll let it slide for now.

I thought the lyrics were actually pretty sick if you take out the Vet dissing part. The flow needs work cause it don't flow natural, but the writing it pretty superb.

I agree with Kez.........

[Rain Matrix]

I'm about ready to diss the vets to how fucking long have I been here?

but anyway about this drop homey I've felt that frustration and this piece was a good read
it flowed well and the rhymes were well placed, keep dropping man I'm listening

[Slim Zaddy]

not bad, it is the best one i seen from you as far as i can remember, keep doing shit like that then you're bound to get recognized

thanks man for the comment .. nd i will keep doing staff like that ..

Vets write hate and then bold it, say quit now, there's still no hope kid,

Bad move. There aren't many vets, meaning you'll piss the few of us off. I'll let it slide for now.

I thought the lyrics were actually pretty sick if you take out the Vet dissing part. The flow needs work cause it don't flow natural, but the writing it pretty superb.

don't take it personal man.. i mean no body here .. i'm just talking in general .. but if you will be satisfyed if i changed it .. then i will . . nd thanks bro , glad u liked it ..

I'm about ready to diss the vets to how fucking long have I been here?

but anyway about this drop homey I've felt that frustration and this piece was a good read
it flowed well and the rhymes were well placed, keep dropping man I'm listening

thanks man .. glad u liked it . i'm doin verse 2 right know .. nd this just was expressing things inside me .. ....

[James R.]

I liked it. You should diss everyone. Creative Writing diss songs are hilarious until they get lame, but you're pretty good so they'd be decent.

Anywho, I liked it man. Enough said. Flow was good. Lyrics were good. Everything was good. Not your BEST piece, but still damn good.

[Slim Zaddy]

I liked it. You should diss everyone. Creative Writing diss songs are hilarious until they get lame, but you're pretty good so they'd be decent.

Anywho, I liked it man. Enough said. Flow was good. Lyrics were good. Everything was good. Not your BEST piece, but still damn good.

Thanks bro I really appreciate that especially from you , I’m so glad that u liked it .. nd you know my improvement’s are coming from your help pal , cuz you told me to write on a beat nd increase vocab etc. so thanks .. , nd some other guys help in here .. anyway common why you don’t come up with a new song .. i'm waiting for your next drop

[James R.]

Lol I'm workin on smtn for you guys. Just waiting for the right time

[Slim Zaddy]

Lol I'm workin on smtn for you guys. Just waiting for the right time

hope it's soon ,..