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Versatile Volume 2

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 23rd, '08, 23:37

I'll rip out his throat and play his vocal cords with a boe
the notes that begins to flow resemble wack lyricism that grows
around the resonator spot, around that fucker weezy's lips
you can't be overrated if you never had a rate to begin with
my sin slips behind the shadow of towered lyricism
I see a prism with spectrum's of light energy burning like metabolisms
causes spasms of the brain, rhythm flowing in my veins like hormones
I got the gore shown around my enemies broken, sore bones
their screamin' in more tones then octaves on piano's
and my flow rushes faster then you can ''sea'' channels
be careful, I'll ignite like dynamite and slice like a knife
my decisive insight relies solely on the life force of strife
tonight I bring the darkness like a solar eclipse
and have all ill rhymes magnetic to me like when the polar ends shift
an MC so fly my feet levitate off the ground like David Blaine
and if you wanna speak ill, just fuckin' say my name.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Versatile Volume 2

Postby Jay-19 » Dec 23rd, '08, 23:50

an MC so fly my feet levitate off the ground like David Blaine
and if you wanna speak ill, just fuckin' say my name.


Loved that line man!
Damn, you really got a talent for this writing shit, for real.
Your vocabulary seem to never end and you come up with the craziest rhyme after the other.
Just keep writing man!
I hope I can hear you spit some of your shit in the near future, to see if you got the whole package, you know what I mean?

10/10 :y:
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Re: Versatile Volume 2

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 24th, '08, 02:27

Thanks both of you :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Versatile Volume 2

Postby James R. » Dec 24th, '08, 03:15

Was better than the last. You've yet to disappoint man. Great job.
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Re: Versatile Volume 2

Postby MC Anonymous » Dec 24th, '08, 03:18

James R. wrote:Was better than the last. You've yet to disappoint man. Great job.

Thanks bro! :y:
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