this isn't my usual style at all, hope u like

[Ka0t1c]

put together like a puzzle are my words
and i don't ever struggle to piece em
they hook to each one and equals
to a number that's even but how does that work?
i'm not leavin out details so now they'll emerge
i found my eyes are like a bald eagle's
they come to me first than any other object on Earth
i'm for real, for whatever it's worth
i see the patterns in the field like a crop circle
scattered in the dirt, to the world, i'm it's dung beetle

[Arabian Shady]

multies,meta's , vocab, flow - all were insane
its was too short for my liking, cause it was fabulous but its wiked the way it is man
dope shit
Peace

[Xray]

put together like a puzzle are my words
and i don't ever struggle to piece em
they hook to each one and equals
to a number that's even but how does that work?

Ok I get what your doing with this piece, 4 bars at a time and 1st and 4th rhyme, than you rhyme the other words in the next 4 lines with rhyming the first and 4th again.

i'm not leavin out details so now they'll emerge
i found my eyes are like a bald eagle's
they come to me first than any other object on Earth
i'm for real, for whatever it's worth
i see the patterns in the field like a crop circle
scattered in the dirt, to the world, i'm it's dung beetle

But what happened here? you completely switched the pattern, and randomized the rhyming words.

[Ka0t1c]

i rhyme equals with details, i say it different so it works...so it doesn't randomize anything, should i bold where it rhymes then? cuz it flows good throughout

[Xray]

i rhyme equals with details, i say it different so it works...so it doesn't randomize anything, should i bold where it rhymes then? cuz it flows good throughout

Oh damn yeah you should have, but great piece now that you mention it.

[Ka0t1c]

lol, thanx for checking it out again