NEW - Life

[Solace]

It's got a weird flow so I don't blame you if you can't catch it, but I flow well they way im doing it. Many pauses here and there.

[Chorus]
It's life, you gotta live it or die,
Suicidal thoughts flashing through my mind,
Hatred releases, friends are deceasing,
Sometimes I ponder on how I'm still breathing.

[Verse 1]
Cold rock, back aches, no blankets...
It's like that every damn night and I hate it,
I'm waiting for something good to happen, (something good to happen...)
Had a voice, something to say, and I took to rapping,
Walking with my garbage bag, I mean my home,
Why am I here? Man...Why am I alone?
Still searching but I can't find the light inside the darkness,
So many hardships, not at rock bottom but I'm falling,
The walls are closing and I can't get out,
Death walks through my head, it's all I can think about,
And I doubt that I'll get out alive,
But I'm trying cause right now I ain't dying.

[Chorus]

[Verse 2]
Being treated like shit, well on lucky days,
Wasting all my money on all these blunts I blaze,
Crying for somebody...But no cry is returned,
A normal life I yearn but I still got a lot to learn,
Thinking about that one day I will shine,
For now, I'm nothing so why you think I commit crimes,
Fed up with all these shit lines, these diss lines,
Buddy I'm pissed off as it is, don't fuck with this mind,
And this time, I ain't taking no jokes,
Playing with hoes, no I ain't taking no more,
I'm a grenade, cooked and I'm ready to blow,
Heating up, my entire surroundings are a stove.
[Chorus]

[mcZu]

Nothing wrong with the flow
Lyrics seem nice, liked the hook
Overall a nice first verse and hook

[Solace]

Thanks man i really appreciate it

[Ka0t1c]

pretty good, i like the cook grenade line a lot, i might steal that now...

[Solace]

pretty good, i like the cook grenade line a lot, i might steal that now...

hahaha thankss man

[Slim Zaddy]

i like the concept .. nd it flowed good .. ah well lyrics were nice ,, overl all good drop .. 8/10 .. gd job

[Solace]

i like the concept .. nd it flowed good .. ah well lyrics were nice ,, overl all good drop .. 8/10 .. gd job

Thanks man

[Xray]

Love the flow on the chorus, flow throughout the verses was good too, good job on that. Vocab needs working on, but the lyrics were great.

Everything I liked but one line made me think otherwise; "Walking with my garbage bag, I mean my home" that's off 8 Mile so I'm not sure what to think of that.

[Solace]

Love the flow on the chorus, flow throughout the verses was good too, good job on that. Vocab needs working on, but the lyrics were great.

Everything I liked but one line made me think otherwise; "Walking with my garbage bag, I mean my home" that's off 8 Mile so I'm not sure what to think of that.

Thanks man, glad you liked it, ill try to improve on vocab next time. What do you mean its off 8mile?

[Xray]

Love the flow on the chorus, flow throughout the verses was good too, good job on that. Vocab needs working on, but the lyrics were great.

Everything I liked but one line made me think otherwise; "Walking with my garbage bag, I mean my home" that's off 8 Mile so I'm not sure what to think of that.

Thanks man, glad you liked it, ill try to improve on vocab next time. What do you mean its off 8mile?

At the beginning of the movie right after when he chokes in front of the crowd he goes outside to grab his garbage bag and says he left the car for his girl so he has no place to stay so that garbage bag was his home till he moved back with his mother.

[Solace]

Love the flow on the chorus, flow throughout the verses was good too, good job on that. Vocab needs working on, but the lyrics were great.

Everything I liked but one line made me think otherwise; "Walking with my garbage bag, I mean my home" that's off 8 Mile so I'm not sure what to think of that.

Thanks man, glad you liked it, ill try to improve on vocab next time. What do you mean its off 8mile?

At the beginning of the movie right after when he chokes in front of the crowd he goes outside to grab his garbage bag and says he left the car for his girl so he has no place to stay so that garbage bag was his home till he moved back with his mother.

I promise i didnt take it though, its not like its hard to think of a poor person whos home is practically a garbage bag.

[Xray]

Yeah I feel ya, I was thinking like you were referring to 8 Mile anyway, I don't think you'd be the type to jack something.

[Solace]

Yeah I feel ya, I was thinking like you were referring to 8 Mile anyway, I don't think you'd be the type to jack something.

Alright thanks