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Remain to Complete

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 5th, '09, 08:54

if there were no place for me to raise my voice
i'd make you see what we face each day with ease
by layin these keys cuz my noise they won't freeze
Kevin McCoy's my name, Emceeing's my game to cease
the ones who have came to teach that guns are okay on these streets
the same repeats when we wanna just play, it keeps all of us at bay
so deep's my pain, i weep, i'm becoming a stray
i've reached no gain in strength from runnin away
my shame's increased, i'd hate to think
nothing's to say to reach the others to save, they'll sink
that does mean, we'll suffer some way because of our kinks
unless we create a scene out the wonderful dreams and save not extinct
what we remain to complete
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Remain to Complete

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 5th, '09, 16:36

pretty nice man i liked it .. concept is good .. lyrics and rhyems are decent .. gd job here, :y: :y:
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z_em = Slim Zaddy = Zaid AQ which is my real name
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