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NEW - Burn You Down (Feat. Ice Killa) *Modified Verse*

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Re: NEW - Burn You Down (Feat. Ice Killa) *Modified Verse*

Postby Solace » Jan 6th, '09, 01:49

With your wack beats, attempts will be feeble,
You're paltry, we look over you like a fuckin' steeple,
Your lyrics are beneath me just like your mother,
These lyrics are a battlefield, you running for cover,
Can't take you serious, you sound like a comedian,
Listen to this verse, oh shit look who got beat again!


You really think that^ is better than:

Rhymes are what your lacking, it's kinda funny,
You acting all pimp when you aint got no money,
My rhymes so sick when I spit my tongue ignites,
Flaming like a lighter, a riot is what I incite,
Calling me an amateur, man I ain't hearing it,
Make your pussy ass bleed as if you were on your period.


We all have diff tastes, so it dont matter. :smoking:
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