NEW Anonymous! Lethal Injection

[MC Anonymous]

Expect the destruction of time bomb letters and words
the flames burn, your hooked like worms, spit with stern verbs
I turn curbs with an aerodynamic flow like titanic rotors
the schematics show words tied together with dynamic sulfur
the combustion explodes, jaw implodes, so I suppose
the flames will glow my face from the hole under my nose
I wondered and chose, now the reflection of my choice was here
the noise you here is meant to tickle the brain's hemispheres
the end is near, lyrical Armageddon, the real verses the fake
all the curses they take is fit for the bloodshed at stake
time to awake, grab your lethal microphones, it's time to battle
my rhymes dismantle weak mandibles, and slaughter the cattle
I ride flows like saddles, with a hawks eye on my gridiron like Seattle
this is not to addle, just watch as my rhymes occupy and straddle

How excellent, this text is meant to burn wack MC excrement's
Now, next the scent is pulverized when the deadly voodoo hex is sent
who's next to vent?, I spent many days formulating and thinking
the blood of virgins I'm drinking, the mind of psycho's I'm speaking
grasp on weakling, the strong hand of power will devour and shower
your hours in blood, and with a dud you'll hear the ballistic bullets fire
insanity is an understatement, I begin to plan my replacements
in a basement, my mind's encasement is not breaking and it's trying my patience
with a rhythm that's ancient I spit algorithm abnormalities
with the blood of the weak on my gun, my gats worn casualties
mental blocks, gentle locks, sentimental shots, a detrimental glock
elemental shocks, instrumentals knock, all from these fundamental spots

Before fools used pro tools my flow moved in the genome of whole grooves
the soul moved, my genes proved to be godlike and unable to remove
rhythm improved, and soon the elements of darkness delivered chaos
for a day off I have to slay soft MC's or else my need will be turned off
walkin' with a heavy cough, sickness to much for the body systems
a victim of false predictions and those who didn't bother to listen
the father of dissin lies in the chest cavity, it's everyone's heart
we all have inner Napoleon Bonaparte, we all can take over our art
from the start of mankind I was alive teaching Adam and Eve how to write
and when I told them not to eat the forbidden fruit, they did it out of spite.

[James R.]

4 words. Record this shit NOW. Sick shit homie.

[Ka0t1c]

some things i like but this just aint the style i like to hear

[Robbie G]

Damn, there goes my chance at the text competition.

[MC Anonymous]

Damn, there goes my chance at the text competition.

It's ok, you could win, it all depends on the votes.

[noel]

I am not into the game whatsoever nor do I claim to know what style is good or bad (I hope you know what I'm getting at...) but as for feedback ...

Overall I liked it.

The end of the second verse was really good and on fire!!

The beginning of the first verse was good for the first couple of lines but then it seemed to slip a little...

I am an Aussie so it may be an accent thing but when I was reading it and saying it your flow seemed a bit off with the lines

I turn curbs with an aerodynamic flow like titanic rotors
the schematics show words tied together with dynamic sulfur

That line and a couple of others in the first verse I just didn't get nor did I feel it- That's all.

Overall again- I really liked it

I liked the rest though...

Keep it up; I like reading all your stuff!!

[Boston]

some sick shit man..i prefer the second and third verses though. keep it up
looking forward to seeing your stuff in the competition

[Slim Zaddy]

4 words. Record this shit NOW. Sick shit homie.

i agree totally .. this shit is sick man .. reallly sick .. good writer over here.. keep it up bro

[Solace]

Great stuff man, liked the 3rd verse the best.

[Ice_Scarred]

Damn! Do you ever have a bad verse!!!!?!?!?!
Tight material bro. Structure was great, Vocabulary was above standard, and of course the verses were pure fire, especially verse 3. I wish I could write stuff like you, looks extra complicated! How long have you been writing?