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The More I See You

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The More I See You

Postby Mr.Maximum » Jan 14th, '09, 03:13

Chorus

Have you ever had a love that does nothing but haunt you
And everytime you get talking to her all she does is fucking taunt you
But shit the more I see you the more I want you
"Why don’t you do something about it" I’m about to!

Have you ever had a girl act like she’d be better off without you
And you know shes lying but fights are all your attempts at truth amount to
But shit the more I see you the more I want you
"Why don’t you do something about it?" I’m about to!

Verse 1

Everytime were together you let all the other guy’s crowd you
And you ignore me and give your attention to the dudes around you
You do it just to piss me off and I should and I could pound you
But I just flip out cause a scene call you up scream and shout to
Then you remind me the only reason your in my life is cause I allowed you
make feel like i couldnt make it without you, then i get doubtful
And you always get the upper hand and then I snap back like a rubber band
Cause I just want to hold my lovers hand and know she wants to fuck her man
Maybe its impossible maybe couples cant help but ruin each others plans
Yo I’m taking a fucking stand either cut the bullshit or put on your pants
and Stop flirting with those faggots when you run errands And yes I understand
that, that was harsh but fuck your coconut lip gloss I’m laying out my cards
so get lost or stop leaving me feeling alone and lost girl you breaking my heart
so its time I taught you a lesson if we part Then it is your loss
yeah I bet you took that one hard like.. "ohh my gosh"
I’m doing what I should have done from the start so how about you dawgs?

Chorus

Have you ever had a love that does nothing but haunt you
And everytime you get talking to her all she does is fucking taunt you
But shit the more I see you the more I want you
"Why don’t you do something about it" I’m about to!

Have you ever had a girl act like she’d be better off without you
And you know shes lying but fights are all your attempts at truth amount to
But shit the more I see you the more I want you
"Why don’t you do something about it?" I’m about to!

Verse 2

What the fuck I love this girl more than life in itself she is a spell
But the thing is the miracle is a curse as well cause my lifes a living hell
I can never frigging tell weather those lips my lips just fucking felt
Were hers or was that someone else this cant be good for my health
I am sitting here loosening my belt knowing that last time that I fell
She wasn’t there shes everywhere but here when things begin to melt
Around me, shes so thoughtful and kind but once were in the public eye
She doesn’t try she just smiles and finds a guy to take her home at night
Isnt she mine? but I continue to find messages with racy sex related reply’s
Inside her phone everytime that I look through it while she’s in mine
Its enough to make me cry and want to tell her its time for goodbye
I’m slowly dying my frozen hearts frying so if shes happy then fine
I’m not sticking around to be abused tommorow you’ll probably see the news
I finally ran out of fuse and just caught the clue and beat her black and blue
Either way I’m screwed get out of my fucking room but I still love you
so bitch, what do you want me to do? i'm so confused

Chorus

Have you ever had a love that does nothing but haunt you
And everytime you get talking to her all she does is fucking taunt you
But shit the more I see you the more I want you
"Why don’t you do something about it" I’m about to!

Have you ever had a girl act like she’d be better off without you
And you know shes lying but fights are all your attempts at truth amount to
But shit the more I see you the more I want you
"Why don’t you do something about it?" I’m about to!
You mothafuckin' chickens ain't brave enough
To say the stuff I say, so just tape it shut
-EMINEM-
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