A Fall from Paradise Feat. Scott Macdougall

[MC Anonymous]

(Scott Macdougall)
why did you have to leave and thieve my ability to breathe
tell me please why have you got me weak at my knees?
'cause see, when you left, a part of me went to heaven
and i'll never know what could've been between you and me
it's depressing, as i drown in my own tears, at bottom of the sea
as i sit in a sweat, tryna deal with all this heat, i can only bleed
i can no longer see, a reason to be, on this sphere that we're in
i hold fear in my grin, as i'm nearing the end, it's sheer and its grim
i swear you're haunting me, it's like i'm seeing things
i'm hearing things, steps on the stairs, you're in my dreams
just creeping in, seeping in, even when i shut my eyes tight
and hide, right, you still shine bright, harder than the night life
i know you miss me, i can't believe you got taken on the fifteenth
you couldn't even kiss me, goodbye, but i know you're listening
you gave me all my energy, and you made the best of me
and i know i'll never see you again, but baby, rest in peace

losing you was something i didn't prepare for
something that i wouldn't even have dared swore
the love of our lives, disappeared from our eyes
and we look up to the skies, asking ourselves why
tears forgave the sins, but we still have rotten skin
lives in a 360 mental spin, our will to live is thin

(MC Anonymous)
My soul was lost at sea with no cost or fee, quite possibly
I'll be on bended knee, tears are here to see, my broken vanity
a catastrophe, I can't imagine it, losing you is a slice to my heart
rolling dice in the dark, even if I win, I was meant to lose from the start
a bruise took a part of me, my life stopped when the devil forgave
on a level he gave, an illusion to life that made me wanna behave
now it's gone, and so are you, I've been beaten black and blue
I see with a blackened hue, death covers my footsteps too
all cause' I lost you, my life spiraled down like a staircase
I can't even look at myself in this damn mirror with a fair face
the author of my book of life burned my pages in a pit of fire
lightning hits the liars, and I'm still here even though I'm holdin' wires
I love you, even when I was in a mental hospital going crazy
thinking of you saved me, and your memory was never hazy
If I have to say goodbye, it will never be just a final farewell
because you'll be in my mind forever, even if I'm condemned to hell.

losing you was something i didn't prepare for
something that i wouldn't even have dared swore
the love of our lives, disappeared from our eyes
and we look up to the skies, asking ourselves why
tears forgave the sins, but we still have rotten skin
lives in a 360 mental spin, our will to live is thin

[James R.]

Wow another dope drop. Your styles really really compliment each other. Both verse were fire and the whole concept was great. Loved it.

[Ka0t1c]

MC - pretty nice, i think you should say "right from the start" tho so it rhymed better

still enjoyed your verse

Scott - i feel ur emotion but the words not really, but still it's good to get it out there

[mcZu]

Nice piece, you both did a great job. Didn't know Scot could write that good, propzz for that, It was not bad Scot. Mc Anon had a great verse, like always. And the verses connected well

[MC Anonymous]

Nice piece, you both did a great job. Didn't know Scot could write that good, propzz for that, It was not bad Scot. Mc Anon had a great verse, like always. And the verses connected well

Thanks bro,

[Ka0t1c]

MC - pretty nice, i think you should say "right from the start" tho so it rhymed better

still enjoyed your verse

Scott - i feel ur emotion but the words not really, but still it's good to get it out there

what can i do to improve..?

i think ur focusing too much on trying to rhyme, also, work on ur vocab, that can help u describe better cuz the more in depth, the more personal it is and that makes u stick out more.