my verse from competition (#4)

[Ka0t1c]

they want me to use the magic word, well that's absurd
i'd rather earn the Vet stat preferred by rep, ya heard
and it's my turn to let it burn cuz i have deserved this
and i've learned i can emerge, yet i am deserted
but i don't regret what hurts cuz it had alerted me
to accept discourage and impress the jury
even though i'd never adjourn my journey
i see the whole world work, so i'm not worried
i won't go berserk, i will surely
insert my sermon for this tourney til my purpose gets blurry
cuz i'm certainly worthy of a purpose further than early birds yearning
cuz since birth i've been searching the turf to rid burdens occuring to be perfect
plus my nerves aren't concerning my turbulence cuz during my current stint
i'm really not hurrying, i'm maturing from hints while observing intents surfacin by Earthlings

I don't know who i am but what i will be you soon shall understand
cuz i'm a human and a man, no one can ruin any plan of me pursuing our land
because i'm thru with my duty with Uncle Sam, my blueprints aren't of sand
i don't need jewelry, just two hands, using them as artillery til my future does expand...

[Slim Zaddy]

wow it was for you , i actually i did vote for number 4. good verse man .. i was num 10 though

[Ka0t1c]

thanx man, i liked ur verse too, it sucked that they posted urs last, i was thinkin not everyone took their time to read em all, u deserved more votes too...

[Slim Zaddy]

thanx man, i liked ur verse too, it sucked that they posted urs last, i was thinkin not everyone took their time to read em all, u deserved more votes too...

ya maybe only few who read it all . so it's hard to reach num 10 ,, but i'm happy anyway ,, i got 3 votes .. still it's good .. but there was no voters at all , only a few who votes .. there is a over a 10000 members over here and total votes was maybe 23 or 24 somethin like this .. i dunno why . anyway gd luck for both of us next time homie ..