I get stuck and the end kinda sucks

[survce]

Tell me how your feelin Are you chilln
I'm willing to confess unless the lesson
I'm guessing Charlton Heston was possessing a
Smith & Wesson but personal protection
It Was outa the question in connection
To the best of my recollection
The Department of correction's recollection
Of the evidence collected at the scene of the crime
Was never at the time redirected for the proper
Reselection of any kinda murder weapon
To be in any kinda connection to any
Of the suspects being held in question
That the full metal jacket traveled in the alleged direction
Not to mention my misapprehension suspension
Can the only witness claim with no one else to blame
Testify that what was seen in a reflection
Prosecution rests Judge thinks it's best
So the jury now has what can be the last
For the man settin in the chair goin no where fast
So the case is as. It's cold Sorry mutha fucker
He done stood up in the back of the line
For the last mutha fuckin time
If the only way to get through to you
Is to do to you what you want me to
by the power invested in me to call
All government connected in what we
Can all see it's the fall of democracy
No better way to word it that's right
The way you just heard it

[Emadyville]

That flow made no sense, and you tried to rhyme too much and it didn't make sense in the beginning, you used 'recollection' twice in a row, then the rhyming went away the second half of the verse. Keep working on structure, flow, and rhyming and you'll get the hang of it.

[Ka0t1c]

drugs are bad, mmkay?