W.A.R ( Feat Neversnooze )

[Slim Zaddy]

feedback would be appreciated .. for both of us ..

Z_EM ( Verse 1 )

mam You’ve Leaded me Through The Old and The New
It’s Saddened me To Say That I’ll Be Leaving You
Today I’m Insisted To Say That I’m Finished
Un-certain, But Now I Know Why I Enlisted
Feeling Gifted Because I Am At The Top of the Class
From The Mop in My Hand.. Not That I Laugh
Because The Thoughts of The Past, Are What Scare Me Today
I Stare a Dare It Its Face, Because They Prepared me This Way
They Say I Have a Debt To This War, Which Is Why I Regret To Inform
The Best From My Dorm.. Are Getting Set To Deport
But Before, Know That The Name On My Vest
Says I Trained with The Best.. We’re Just Being Paid For It Next
My Men Are A Benefit, Their A Steady Hit
So It’s a Gift To Go With The Rest Of My Regiment
Don’t Worry Mom.. I’ll Be Back and UN-Hurt
Infer That This Is Your Tax Dollars At Work..
You’ll Learn, And I Know The Past, Its Only An Ocean Back
So I Send You My Wishes Tied Around A Photograph
Here’s A Kiss, Blow This Back n’ Notice That Theirs Always A Risk
But Theirs Always A Problem That Needs To Be Fixed
Im Not Fond Of What Hates, But I Know How To Dodge These Mistakes
So My Next Letter Will Be Sent With The Progress We Make
I Know What This Must Mean to You But I Must See This Through
I’ll Be Writing.. I Miss You With All The Love From Me To You

chorus

Be Free to my angry armored fists, makes me wish
we were once born purely innocent now we’re pissed
Heard an explosion corroding peoples ears with fear
Never felt so guilty for feeling completely sincere
devised by the grown who is too old to comprehend
at times violence is the answer, shoot them in the head
RPG's shot smoke through the air, leaving there trails
Raps Provoked Gangs but these weapons dealing higher sales

Neversnooze (Verse 2 )

A classic soldier baring his musket and boot
Wearing the glory feeling don’t trust just shoot
The handle of a machine gun, will try to kill anybody invading town
A place of grown up history, we will protect to fill everybody decaying mounds
Trying to save it when it’s hectic war, In hectic way of fighting motion
We will survive these hectic times, these messed up crying emotions
imagine a door cracked open killing innocent what kind of a show
care for a peek, big weapons are killers, small ones are slow
Thousands dead, pounds of blood, pounds of decaying flesh
But it’s finally done, the war, finally in a place of working mesh
When society in working order, no more war for the suffering
As we leave to save another country, were thanks for their living
look at the dead and wounded, you could be the next dude
stop your hiding like defence mechanism created by Freud
the psychologist would say come out seeking, this aint about sex
its about war so stop the blood and tears shed cuz it’s sick
Feeling of greatness bombs away in way I juts cannot explain
As I leave, I see a girl with her teddy bear, “take it and don’t complain


chorus

Be Free to my angry armored fists, makes me wish
we were once born purely innocent now we’re pissed
Heard an explosion corroding peoples ears with fear
Never felt so guilty for feeling completely sincere
devised by the grown who is too old to comprehend
at times violence is the answer, shoot them in the head
RPG's shot smoke through the air, leaving there trails
Raps Provoked Gangs but these weapons dealing higher sales




Z_EM( VERSE 3)

We Are Monsters, Guns, Torture and Noose
We Love To Kill, And War is Our Excuse
We Run Into Towns, Holdin Families Back
I Killed A Man Today.. Wonder Where His Families At
I’m Sad and Upset, I Trash at His Flesh
N’ The Only Difference is the Flag On Our Vests
Im Passionate Yet n’ Try To Bend on Whats Real
I’ve Won Medals To Remind Of All The Men That I’ve Killed
But Still, My Emotions.. Not Aloud Speak Of
Because If Im A Monster.. I’m Proud To Be One
I Believed It Last Night, For The Reasons We Fight
And If I Didn’t Do Well Yesterday.. I’ll Prove It Tonight
We Goin Back Out Again, To Scout The Men
I’m Just Hoping Your Thinkin “Damnit I’m Proud Of Him”
I Bring My Heart To The Table, You Always Believed In It
But When I Exit The Tent, That’s Where Im Leavin It
Nothing Against Morals This Is Just Not Words
Cuz The More Kind Man Is The One Who Gets Shot First
I Love You Mom, I Miss You n’ I’m Sorry But Writings Hard
Just Know I’m Here For You and I’m Fighting Hard
I Don’t Know When I’ll Write Back, Its To Far To Tell
Remember Me Mother, and I Hope All Is Well

[Slim Zaddy]

22 views and not a single feedback on this ..

[mcZu]

Nice imagery, vivid story. Loved all verses, but neversnooze could work a bit on the flow, nontheless loved your verse too. Style did connect well sorta, rhymings was above average.
Overall a nice collab

[Ka0t1c]

wow, Z_Em, you got some great writing skills on this piece, i can see u really wanted to get this one out, very powerful! 10/10 for you, just needs minor improvements like spelling... vocab was great, very impressive, the best piece i've read from u. record it soon!

[Slim Zaddy]

wow, Z_Em, you got some great writing skills on this piece, i can see u really wanted to get this one out, very powerful! 10/10 for you, just needs minor improvements like spelling... vocab was great, very impressive, the best piece i've read from u. record it soon!

, thanks man for the feed , i really appreciate that bro , glad you liked though and i love 10/10 , damn thanks .. for recording i'm working on myself first ...

Nice imagery, vivid story. Loved all verses, but neversnooze could work a bit on the flow, nontheless loved your verse too. Style did connect well sorta, rhymings was above average.
Overall a nice collab

thanks man ,, much appreciated ,,