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Re: Amazing Grace

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 26th, '09, 05:29

this was deep and it has some very good rhyming in spots also hook was nice as well, keep dropping
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Re: Amazing Grace

Postby randomghost » Jan 26th, '09, 07:02

deep lyrics..good stuff :y:
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Re: Amazing Grace

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 26th, '09, 07:07

you have some very good rhymes in this piece and it is very well written, it is real and that's what makes it awesome and original, keep it up Scott...but don't take me job!!!!! lmfao :y: :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Amazing Grace

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 26th, '09, 14:09

it's very good , i like the emotion in it .. pretty good job here bro :y: :y:
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Re: Amazing Grace

Postby Ella » Jan 26th, '09, 15:12

wow.. very deep :thumbsup2:
i wnna hear how that sounds dood hurry up &record it or w/e..
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Re: Amazing Grace

Postby Sophie » Jan 26th, '09, 17:42

It looks too good for you to write :shifty:
I'm jokiiing

It's awesome :y:
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it's safe to say i paved the way, for you to play the games you played
i guess i say i take the blame, for all the lies and pain i faced
now i watch you fade away the one who denied me my amazing grace...

My fave for some reason. idk why. But it is, lool.
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Chill a nity you boon.
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