A Force To Be Reckoned With

[Rain Matrix]

when you see me try to picture a Presidential Mind
I'm the kind of mc that has a Head Of Mental Rhymes

you can catch me in the booth making executive Decisons
my lyrics have all of the cancerous haters in Remission

so when I spit on a mic I fuck with you like Chemo
call me a pusher cuz I continue to serve Fiends Dope

after all someone has to lead this often crazy Nation
bitch, your either with me or suffering from Radiation

attempting to battle will end up a real Bad Night
once I'm in your system I don't have a Half Life

just so you know I'm not to interested in meeting New Faces
you might think your hot now but I'll have your cells Mutated

I think we both know if you want beef then I'll Eat Ya Tracks
rain matrix is the bomb do you really wanna See the Flash

my style can't be copied so please beware if your All Mouth
I'll hit the game winning dunk and never put the Ball Down

my plan is in motion you can bet I'm not gonna Stall Now
don't detonate the truth if you can't deal with tha Fallout

[gutawafang]

Nice. I like the way you arrange the lines.

[James R.]

I'm feelin it man. Nice flow to it. It's just as good as everything you've written lately, but that's a double edged sword because I feel that you can still bring it up a notch. Not sure what exactly you need to do. Maybe switch up your style a little bit? Play with some new shit? I dunno, but you're plateauing right now and I know you still have miles to improve.