My Prez is Half White tooooooooo!!!

[Solace]

It was good but i couldnt understand the rhyme scheme.

Like it was first:

pipe, then right. Which is right. Then it was along and then bong. Which is right. Then it was lambo's blue and then promise? If that line scheme, along with "Saddam is" and "Dealt With" were fixed, this would be quite good

[Ka0t1c]

i like it

[tjb]

i like your position its not like a average super liberal rapper.
it was smart an cuz i agreed with this it might have biased me to like it more
but nonetheless good work