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I dont even know what im doing, so blazed

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I dont even know what im doing, so blazed

Postby Slovinec » Jan 28th, '09, 06:01

I take pride in breaking notes
Same point of view like jagged edge doing coke\
spraying words like thunder, wating for somebody to scream louder
cause im faded
i already looked at some shit and bated
Look at my eyes with all the blood
i feel sorry for my braincells i flud
but im cool,
dont need to smoke that much
cause in 10hours ill be eating lunch
maybe in that time, ill jerk a few
sniff and crack the rest of u
but its okay im sorry
cause tonigh im feelin a litte drowzy
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Re: I dont even know what im doing, so blazed

Postby Requiem » Jan 28th, '09, 06:06

^flow was all over the place, and the rhymes weren't even there. but i enjoyed it :happy: i mean, it was simple, and got across a few amusing lines :8)
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Re: I dont even know what im doing, so blazed

Postby Slovinec » Jan 28th, '09, 06:09

dude i dont even write raps, im so gone right now idont know wtf im doing hahah
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Re: I dont even know what im doing, so blazed

Postby Requiem » Jan 28th, '09, 06:16

^ LMAO, just don't like walk into the wall. or hurt urself while ur jerkin :happy:
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Re: I dont even know what im doing, so blazed

Postby Slovinec » Jan 28th, '09, 06:23

aww shit i did that once, but it was on the balcony and i slipped on some snow and i had i wood and fell on it
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