Poetry

[MC Anonymous]

Dust off my shoes, as I slip into darkness
trust in the booze, lose drips that are spark less
love slips away, I trip into regions
believe in the pain, die within legions
glass heart melts, veins turn to shards
illusions meets eyes, their fate is carved
walk a lonely man, barefoot on the sun
our gazes grace, this burning pain is one
perceive the visuals, debunk the facts
destiny doesn't listen, don't ignore this track
picture frames, listening, wondering why
my photographs look like it's about to cry
deepened sympathy, exists only with death
when the chime sounds, I know I have nothing left
existance, watches as the clocks rewinds
fate rows up in lines, roadblocking time
silence sweeps, violence falls at my feet
what's fluid in my speech becomes concrete
a page of heart, enunciated visual imagery
you're seeing me, but I'm not the real me

[James R.]

Gave you feed on MSN about this. I'm lovin the flow to this. You've shortened your lines up and you've made it 50 times easier to follow your flow and FEEL your stuff. Good job man. Lyrically you're always on point, but text wise you've pretty much perfected your craft man. Good job.

[MC Anonymous]

Gave you feed on MSN about this. I'm lovin the flow to this. You've shortened your lines up and you've made it 50 times easier to follow your flow and FEEL your stuff. Good job man. Lyrically you're always on point, but text wise you've pretty much perfected your craft man. Good job.

Thanks bro!!

[gutawafang]

This is poetic. I feel it man.

It's always Art you create man!

[noel]

Cool- if poetry was as good as this (and other people's writings on this board) when I went to school I might have done better at English!!

I used to really hate poetry when I was younger so it is a bit ironic that I trawl a hip hop site and read the writing section...

[MC Anonymous]

Cool- if poetry was as good as this (and other people's writings on this board) when I went to school I might have done better at English!!

I used to really hate poetry when I was younger so it is a bit ironic that I trawl a hip hop site and read the writing section...

Wow that's a great compliment!! I'm thrilled that you like my writing! I'll keep dropping for ya so you can enjoy my work more

This is poetic. I feel it man.

It's always Art you create man!

Thanks man! I try to put my heart in whatever I write.

[Ka0t1c]

this piece kicks ass, i seen some minor spots (very minor) with the flow so i give u a 99/100... i wish u wrote all ur music this well if not better, but then again that's my opinion of ur lyrics... i read all ur stuff but the ones i don't feed on just means i'm not feeling it and i see others are so what i mean is you're a great artist and this piece i enjoy more than your usual stuff.

[MC Anonymous]

this piece kicks ass, i seen some minor spots (very minor) with the flow so i give u a 99/100... i wish u wrote all ur music this well if not better, but then again that's my opinion of ur lyrics... i read all ur stuff but the ones i don't feed on just means i'm not feeling it and i see others are so what i mean is you're a great artist and this piece i enjoy more than your usual stuff.

Thanks bro! As you seen I have many different styles with the way I write. I'll try to incorporate more poetry in my lyrics, as well as story telling seeing how it will differentiate me from the rest. Thanks for the feed man

[mcZu]

Sick. Poetry in it's essence, hiphop aura dripping off it

[badzy]

wow!
love the quote..not finish yet with my poem..i'll post it as soon as i finish the last line..


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