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Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 30th, '09, 22:16

Drop a hot line, spot mine like I'm sniffin' coke
drippin' dope, take a look at me, blind like false hope
lyrical entity, come at me, get wrapped in bags
get smacked like fags, lines stay hot like drags
who want it, my delivery fresh like subway drivers
rhymes put a smile on your face like rollback fliers
keep the heat tucked in like stop, drop and roll
pot in bowls, get me even higher then air control
take off planes, to maneuver in the dirt like car tires
corrupted and fired, to spit flames like gas to lighters
strike fear into the hearts of crews like wild pitches
I have no style glitches, stay with cheddar like snitches
my flow is unmatched, like the Nile when it overflows
you know, got more green then places where clovers grow.
a gangster savant, all you gotta call me is prodi'"G''
obviously, my writings impress like Shakespeare possibly

I stay with the bars that glow red like blacksmith hammers
get smashed faster, then a enemy line wide open to capture
a tactician, stomping across radio stations like WWII jets
omnipresent, like sunlight underneath prisoner metal beds
put the nozzle to your eye, and spray it faster then exams
can you read the letters, must be to complex to understand
swipe your girls numbers, just to dial her death like Kevorkian
what type of damage is this, must be some type of a war we in
my lines will groove around in ya head, until I get my ''axe on''
and decapitate, with 10 last seconds you look at Satan's spawn
and realize, yet it's to late, like James bond with a timer at 00:00
my mind is feral, about to change your face like villain to a superhero
I'll play around with your lines, to reach you like a phone operator
I got the heater, about to blaze it faster then Yoda's light saber
in a car, I spit, punches hit so fast the windows melt cause' of friction
head decapitates and crashes into a windshield, you echo my diction
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Jan 31st, '09, 02:06, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 30th, '09, 22:39

good shit man, nothing much else to say but that is nice
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 30th, '09, 22:41

Kaotic wrote:good shit man, nothing much else to say but that is nice

Thanks dude, decided to make a wordplay only song. You're gonna see a story telling song done after I'm done with this. Coming Soon! :flower:
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby mcZu » Jan 30th, '09, 22:56

Loved the wordplay :y: This shit made me eager to write a verse filled with wordplay :shifty:
Keep up the wordplay dude, next time try some other influences as wordplay :y:

EDIT:

Second verse is sick dude, that's what I call wordplay :y: Creative ass wordplay :y:
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 30th, '09, 23:30

mcZu wrote:Loved the wordplay :y: This shit made me eager to write a verse filled with wordplay :shifty:
Keep up the wordplay dude, next time try some other influences as wordplay :y:

EDIT:

Second verse is sick dude, that's what I call wordplay :y: Creative ass wordplay :y:

:flower: Thanks dude
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 30th, '09, 23:36

word thats tight check mine
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 31st, '09, 00:32

Purple23Haze wrote:word thats tight check mine

lol, ok later :y:
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby James R. » Jan 31st, '09, 00:52

As stated above. this is nice. The wordplay is funny as hell at some spots. Very creative.
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby Solace » Jan 31st, '09, 02:04

Sick man, as you told me before. I expected nothing less of you :y: What are you going to add to it, since it says NOT DONE in the title?
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Re: Word Madness [NOT DONE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 31st, '09, 14:59

Epiphany wrote:Sick man, as you told me before. I expected nothing less of you :y: What are you going to add to it, since it says NOT DONE in the title?

:y: :y: Thanks dude, :flower:
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Re: Word Madness complete.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 31st, '09, 21:33

Come on yall, this deserves more feed then it's getting. bump. :y:
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