NEW - Massacre

[Solace]

My words aren't just words, they're lyrical entities,
Dismembering your body, nothing'll be left you'll see,
You're insufficient, you're nothing, you're inexistant,
You can't fight back, there will be no resistance,
No mercy, no holding back, walls painted with bloodshed,
Words painted with carnage, flash of an eye, your loves dead,
You're cornered, you're trapped, not one back-up plan,
Cut up you're body, soon I'll have to stack up hands,
The guts are surfeit, in fact their just unlimited,
They're infinite, I can feel the heat now diminishing,
The odor escalating, it's like hell and I am Satan,
Dinner is served, and special desert is in the making.

[Requiem]

had a very nice flow to it, the beginning was very strong, as was the ending. the middle didn't do it for me, not enought perfect rhymes. but it was still a really good piece. u should record it as a freestyle, and i'll make a beat to it. turn it into a "denace the menace" track

[Wreck]

My words aren't just words, they're lyrical entities,
Dismembering your body, nothing'll be left you'll see,
You're insufficient, you're nothing, you're inexistant,
You can't fight back, there will be no resistance,
No mercy, no holding back, walls painted with bloodshed,
Words painted with carnage, flash of an eye, your loves dead,
You're cornered, you're trapped, not one back-up plan,
Cut up you're body, soon I'll have to stack up hands,
The guts are surfeit, in fact their just unlimited,
They're infinite, I can feel the heat now diminishing,
The odor escalating, it's like hell and I am Satan,
Dinner is served, and special desert is in the making.

Dope shit. The beginning was fantastic. Perfect story telling, flow on point no doubt & lyrical. Nice multies. The end got choppy and broke down but it's all good- you came with deepness, skills & heat. Keep it up and nice job man. Good shit.

I'm about to post something like this myself, but check out my shit in CW, Piph

[Solace]

had a very nice flow to it, the beginning was very strong, as was the ending. the middle didn't do it for me, not enought perfect rhymes. but it was still a really good piece. u should record it as a freestyle, and i'll make a beat to it. turn it into a "denace the menace" track

Why would i lie and say it was a freestyle? Naw i cant record. im trying to record my piece The World, but the past 3 weeks ive had no time.

My words aren't just words, they're lyrical entities,
Dismembering your body, nothing'll be left you'll see,
You're insufficient, you're nothing, you're inexistant,
You can't fight back, there will be no resistance,
No mercy, no holding back, walls painted with bloodshed,
Words painted with carnage, flash of an eye, your loves dead,
You're cornered, you're trapped, not one back-up plan,
Cut up you're body, soon I'll have to stack up hands,
The guts are surfeit, in fact their just unlimited,
They're infinite, I can feel the heat now diminishing,
The odor escalating, it's like hell and I am Satan,
Dinner is served, and special desert is in the making.

Dope shit. The beginning was fantastic. Perfect story telling, flow on point no doubt & lyrical. Nice multies. The end got choppy and broke down but it's all good- you came with deepness, skills & heat. Keep it up and nice job man. Good shit.

I'm about to post something like this myself, but check out my shit in CW, Piph

Thanks man glad you liked it, and ill check your shit out man. Ive seen some of it before and i was impressed, your quite good at writing

[Requiem]

^ alright man, just record when u can. lmao, i got like the rest of my life

[Solace]

^ alright man, just record when u can. lmao, i got like the rest of my life

lucky lol i thought i would have time today but my sister came home as i was setting up

[Wreck]

Thanks man glad you liked it, and ill check your shit out man. Ive seen some of it before and i was impressed, your quite good at writing

No prob. bro. Ok thanks, and thanks for the feed on that jawn I just posted a min ago. Thanks man. You're real good at writing too, and at making album covers if I remember right. Keep 'em coming.

[Solace]

Thanks man glad you liked it, and ill check your shit out man. Ive seen some of it before and i was impressed, your quite good at writing

No prob. bro. Ok thanks, and thanks for the feed on that jawn I just posted a min ago. Thanks man. You're real good at writing too, and at making album covers if I remember right. Keep 'em coming.

Thanks, and i guess im okay with album covers. I actually just posted a topic in Graphics section about doing free covers

[Wreck]

Thanks, and i guess im okay with album covers. I actually just posted a topic in Graphics section about doing free covers

Nice, I'll check that out. I'm not a noob but if people like or don't mind doing it, hey, it's up to them on that and if they don't, they need practice, so they need people to come to them with album covers I guess. Not sayin you bad that you need practice- just talkin about if people don't mind doing it for free, especially if their good at it. Do you rap? You should do your own album covers and mixtape covers if you are (a rapper). Shit, even designs for singles you put out, from any album, would be dope shit, like they do commercially.

[Solace]

Thanks, and i guess im okay with album covers. I actually just posted a topic in Graphics section about doing free covers

Nice, I'll check that out. I'm not a noob but if people like or don't mind doing it, hey, it's up to them on that and if they don't, they need practice, so they need people to come to them with album covers I guess. Not sayin you bad that you need practice- just talkin about if people don't mind doing it for free, especially if their good at it. Do you rap? You should do your own album covers and mixtape covers if you are (a rapper). Shit, even designs for singles you put out, from any album, would be dope shit, like they do commercially.

im pretty much just a writer. ive done 1 track, and it wasnt good at all. and im only 13 years old so im trying to find how i wanna write and sound when i rap, you know? Course I'll be doing my own covers And yes I do think I need practice, and it's pretty much the reason I'm doing them, (and I think it's fun too). But i would never charge them for it, I just want simple credit for it

[Wreck]

im pretty much just a writer. ive done 1 track, and it wasnt good at all. and im only 13 years old so im trying to find how i wanna write and sound when i rap, you know? Course I'll be doing my own covers And yes I do think I need practice, and it's pretty much the reason I'm doing them, (and I think it's fun too). But i would never charge them for it, I just want simple credit for it

That's cool man. You just gotta keep at it. I've had so much hate, yet so much advice and shit people told me, you just can't give up or get down cause of people trying to hate on you. Think about it. Even the most talented rappers commercially get hate. Eminem, 2pac, Big, The Game. They ALL get hate and tons of it, no matter how many fans and people they have and who love them. Yeah that's good. I'm the same way with trying to figure out how to sound. I'm the same way with working on and fixing my flow as well. That's cool you enjoy making the covers, and that you don't care about a price in return.

[Slim Zaddy]

that's sick man , i love it .. keep it up bro