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Textstyle... Done in 5 minutes

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 2nd, '09, 21:49

Deliver skull crushin' pressure, cold as December
remember letters to unearth bold ass flame embers
extreme, deception comes easy to me, the end of me
even if you spend the G's, packers will be my enemies
those who pack heat, get cracked teeth, in the back seat
mind's running like track meets, reach in and grab sleet
ice cold snow, what I told grows into temperature drops
droplets from metallic objects poppin' from project cops
slip into oblivion, 151 with fifty guns spittinʼ blood from lungs
regurgitate pipe bombs, hype them, death they did sung
I've come; I go, let the techs blow with an expert flow, show
The text drones, explode pyro indigo colored flame clones
Soul receiver, guarding gates, plates filled with colored hate
A red slate, like when a girl ovulates, you canʼt pop my tapes
Propagate, reform being war torn, sworn I was born with horns
Alone, prone to floors of spikes, cornered and was easily scorn
Alliance, defiant to tyrants, decided I would combine ammo
With camo, walk around like Rambo, slam heads like anvils
Peripheral lyrical, egotistical for remedial vision expectancy
Text techs will see, either you freeze, or get crushed like XTC
Empty these clips, motherfucker you got my karma fearing now
Combine my anger; your vest canʼt cover my armor piercing rounds
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: Textstyle... Done in 5 minutes

Postby mcZu » Feb 2nd, '09, 22:29

Impreesive, textstyle done in 5 min. That just showed how you control words and the use of your vocab :y:
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Re: Textstyle... Done in 5 minutes

Postby Solace » Feb 2nd, '09, 22:32

Really good shit bro, I couldn't do that in 1 hour. Impressive multies and vocab, and the content was sick. Gave me some graphic images in my head :p

Nice drop MC :y:
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Re: Textstyle... Done in 5 minutes

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 2nd, '09, 23:52

Epiphany wrote:Really good shit bro, I couldn't do that in 1 hour. Impressive multies and vocab, and the content was sick. Gave me some graphic images in my head :p

Nice drop MC :y:

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Re: Textstyle... Done in 5 minutes

Postby James R. » Feb 3rd, '09, 00:53

This is god damn impressive to think up and type in 5 mins man. You were on speed writing this shit lol. Naw but it's tight shit man. Good job.
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