Wasted Youth

[Slim Zaddy]

this is pretty nice ,, i could notice an improvement over this piece ,, i really loved it ,, the concept is great , rhymes were arranged right , lyrics are nice too , i could flow to it easly but again ,, try to make you song looks nice , cuz it will be easy on us to read and flow , and even for you .. gd job here homie ,, keep the heat up

[James R.]

AHA! I caught onto your rhyme scheme and it flowed soooo much better. Not flawless, but you always have to allow for a bit of a change in flow when someone who didn't write it reads it lol. Anyways I liked the content a lot. Reminded me of Eminem a lot in some different places. Some spots I was reminded of Lose Yourself, others I even reminded of Stan with some of the words you used. The rhyming was good, you have a pretty good grasp of multies and you have a good vocab as well so it makes for great expression. Good job on this man.