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random stanzas

Postby gutawafang » Feb 4th, '09, 06:11

Practicing. I wrote each stanza at different times and different days. I'ma lay them here.

memory money
memory money reminds me of the cash stashed
every sunny days, combines this in a rap bash
makes you think twice when i slash ass
mad les, trans-ves, i'ma flash yes

that chair
that chair, i sat there i'm a mad man
fed bears, dad heir, i'm a sad stan
relapse glares in this raps stairs, let them
collapse lairs, in this laps rares, get them

abhors corporal
I salute this corporal,
I act cute, get in trouble
Do i have the honor to abhor this
try to be honest so i secue this
now i'm pissed cuz you didn't take hats off me
instead you fucking lay craps on me
that's on me, cheers it's abhor, a whore
i fucking tore and wore, it's a war, roar

abet detest
I don't detest, I won't protest, digest
I suggest, relax, distress, my jest
Thanks for abetting,
now I have an undeniable dope
u can't oppose me, overdose me,
rhyming's THE hope

hypochondriac celibacy
i'm ill,
hospital's next i'm gon' be at
cuz i'm getting killed,
doctors gonna treat this hypochondriac
gon' be mad, lying stiff on the laundry mat
sexually arouse you,
this artistic calligraphy
hold them in, don't let it house you,
sad to be you, celibacy

palindrome excommunication
i got a down syndrome, frowned bitches
i'm in a drowned system, a clown missed them
palindrome, monochrome, i'm caring no monotones
what i DID, i'ma PEEP, look at my evil deeds, hormones

awesome walking
on the true street, i see someone awesome walking
and i knew it, i saw a handsome talking
and it was me, then a kid tossed me
crossed me, forced me, then he lost me

eyelids
I didn't wanna even glance so I shut my eyelids
I didn't wanna dance so I pop it like this
No lights lit shall brighten my prized shits
No psyche shit shall enlighten my pride bitch

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Re: random stanzas

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 4th, '09, 08:05

it was a good practising ,, some lines are sick over there,, so keep doing these staff,, then you will jump to a high level :y:
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