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NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby Steve Spag » Jan 31st, '09, 23:42

I literally JUST finished writing this piece now. I found this beat last night, "Back To The World" by VTZ on Soundclick if anyone's interested, and just decided now to sit down and write a 16 to it.
It's got a pretty consistant flow on it, sounds pretty badass the way I rap it with the slant-rhymes, so hopefully you catch on to it. Tried puttin' some humor to a weed verse here, not much else to say, lol. The end might be changed, the last line is kind of an inside joke that we have with the crew. Anyways, let me know what you think, any and all feed is appreciated!

it's like chronic and hash mixed together and mashed//
and then you smoke it all up, it's an incredible batch//
let it fill it up your lungs, and better try not to gasp//
'cause it'll heighten your buzz if it's some really good grass//
get in line at the club if anyone wants to match//
you could slide me a bud and i will spin it up fat//
up inside of a blunt, you can hit it then pass//
and if you rip it you're out, and you ain't gettin' it back//
i ain't sick of this drug, and i ain't flippin' the tabs//
i only stick to my greens that are as big as my sack//
yeah i've lit up a j, and i wish it could last//
a whole frickin' day, so i would never finish my stash//
i'll be sittin' there baked while i listen to tracks//
disappear and get naked and go sink in the bath//
i ain't thinkin' that straight, but here's my question i ask//
what if you shit through your dick and you could piss out your ass?//
hahaaa

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2009

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 1st, '09, 00:04

I've seen you do better, it's still good though. It got boring to me in the middle IMO. 7/10 :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby Solace » Feb 1st, '09, 00:21

MC Anonymous wrote:I've seen you do better, it's still good though. It got boring to me in the middle IMO. 7/10 :y:

I agree completely with MC Anonymous.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby James R. » Feb 2nd, '09, 14:31

Definitely not your best. I like the way you use some words, but I think this would definitely be a filler track on an album, but Ithink it'd be un-skipable on a mixtape or just as a myspace track to get some buzz back. That said this is probably the least great piece I've seen from you which is awesome in and of itself. Good job though man. No doubt about that.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 2nd, '09, 14:41

was'nt your best as said ,, but you're sick in audio section . no doubt :wave:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby SajN » Feb 2nd, '09, 14:48

I agree with everyone else, not your best. I wouldn't say it's even close to one of your best. But hey, you know I love your drops ;)
And this was good, not something I could relate to though ....... yet :shifty:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby gutawafang » Feb 2nd, '09, 14:50

hmmm. i think this should be my first time seeing ur rhymes. pretty good.
i mean, good vocab and all. i wanted to see more. :happy:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 2nd, '09, 17:52

Wow, I honestly didn't expect this much feed for this little piece here, lmao. Thanks for the feed guys, I'll probably eventually record this one day and up it here so you can hear the flow for it.

And don't forget to vote tomorrow in the audio tourny!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby neversnooze » Feb 3rd, '09, 18:42

it was good, you kept your flow from beginning to end. i also liked how you described good grass and how simple it is haha :D
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Grass

Postby Arabian Shady » Feb 4th, '09, 19:35

i found it hilarious man, flow was wiked (as you said) couple a sick lines, last one the best tho lol :y:
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