They've Done So MuchShit for Me

[Slim Zaddy]

damn man I hate it when it storm
Haters like raindrops, aplenty since I was born
But we catch up and hang now and then
what I’m doubtin again, something foul in the wind
As I can see, we still as real as Ricky’s history
Damn man what went wrongs that’s tha mystery

these lines are great ,, you know .. i have listend to the beat ,, and your words fits there ,, flow is perfect here, as i could see,, the content was there but it can be much more into details cuz it's a good one actually ,, rhymes were simple but still nice , they fit,, complexity sometimes runed the song .. so it was a good drop .. but next time try write more verses ,,or a full song actually see your skills .. gd job homie here

[Slim Zaddy]

damn man I hate it when it storm
Haters like raindrops, aplenty since I was born
But we catch up and hang now and then
what I’m doubtin again, something foul in the wind
As I can see, we still as real as Ricky’s history
Damn man what went wrongs that’s tha mystery

these lines are great ,, you know .. i have listend to the beat ,, and your words fits there ,, flow is perfect here, as i could see,, the content was there but it can be much more into details cuz it's a good one actually ,, rhymes were simple but still nice , they fit,, complexity sometimes runed the song .. so it was a good drop .. but next time try write more verses ,,or a full song actually see your skills .. gd job homie here

about complexity ruining it it's because the flow shifts because the end of my verse is based on meth's second , real as any std, so they don't mesh right, but yeah I'll try and fix that, 'm glad yyou liked it, i was iffy on this one, thanks man you always bring the feedback

anytime man ,,

[gutawafang]

Man, i totally feel it man. I mean, i think it came from your heart?

But if this is just ta be, will yall be pissed at me
When friends is what we cease ta be, I’ve still got ya backs easily nice one.

[James R.]

I can relate to the song. I thought it was a good drop. Lyrics fit the beat well (great beat btw) and the vibe of the lyrics and music made for a good read. Wouldn't say it's my favorite from you because the rhyming and vocab were pretty basic compared to your other stuff but I felt it nonetheless. Good job bro.

[Ka0t1c]

nice Coleon, this was the best piece i've seen from you

i listened to the beat and compared your lyrics to them and it was on point, i could follow thru when i was rapping it out loud and i could vibe to it. this was written very well, something that you should never stop doing, especially if it's written from the heart. well done man, i'm feeling this bro

..."when I stepped in the forum
Grabbed mics and tore em outa boredom
Fell back with friends, caught up then ignored em"

that part hooked me into your lyrics

[Ivy]

Flow goes great with the beat, I was really feeling this. This is the first piece I've read by you, and I'm loving your unique style. I'll definetely keep my eyes open for more drops...