The Choice is Yours

[MC Anonymous]

My friends, Martin Luther King had a dream, he seen
a revolution, a scene, he didn't expect to lucidly bleed
yet he did, now I'm standing on his podium with a dream
united we fall, and fallen bodies rise in humanities stream
see the trinity in light beams, Poetry, Music, and Rhythm
much more involved then gunshots and murderous victims
fragile life, a glass box rotating around the circle of time
meteors slam the infrastructure, it rebuilds with rhymes
orbiting compassion, overruled by the shadows of hate
let these rhymes reach who stay up and wallow till late
a army of love, a message delivered by the common man
with a brigade behind me, in war scarred and barren land
as the desert spills into the sand, melted rubies flow
dark blood red, with white droplets and a whitened glow
hope does show, as the stream circulates around the lines
from desert to oceans, fault lines, and even hidden mines
and as they meet their origin, they reach the planet's core
mother earth was pregnant, and we are what she stored
connected we are, no matter what skin color or race
no matter what mental disorder or problem we face
we came from the earth, we came from the same origin
this is the type of truth that can't be injected like heroin
it takes a person to admit mistakes that have been made
to cry with remorse for the pain that they have gave
it takes a person to contemplate, and decide to change
so what does that make us? do we not have the range?
humanity is extinct, unless the cycle can be destroyed
and replaced with the melted rubies to fill the void.

The Choice is Yours.

[gutawafang]

Everything was like, perfect. "an army of love" hooked me.
"mother earth was pregnant, and we are what she stored"
"we came from the earth, we came from the same origin"
Well, I should quote the whole thing.

I mean, the whole shit just rocks the hell outta me. I love it.

[MC Anonymous]

Everything was like, perfect. "an army of love" hooked me.
"mother earth was pregnant, and we are what she stored"
"we came from the earth, we came from the same origin"
Well, I should quote the whole thing.

I mean, the whole shit just rocks the hell outta me. I love it.

Thanks dude!

[mcZu]

It was superb to say the least, nice way of painting a picture. Loved the vocabulary, the rhyme-scheme and the vibe it had. Flow seemed flawless if read out loud, don't know if it will be the same on a beat, depends on choice of beat. Anyways it's pretty sick, I enjoyed reading every single line. So good job on that

[MC Anonymous]

It was superb to say the least, nice way of painting a picture. Loved the vocabulary, the rhyme-scheme and the vibe it had. Flow seemed flawless if read out loud, don't know if it will be the same on a beat, depends on choice of beat. Anyways it's pretty sick, I enjoyed reading every single line. So good job on that

Thanks dude! always supply good feed

[MC Anonymous]

It was superb to say the least, nice way of painting a picture. Loved the vocabulary, the rhyme-scheme and the vibe it had. Flow seemed flawless if read out loud, don't know if it will be the same on a beat, depends on choice of beat. Anyways it's pretty sick, I enjoyed reading every single line. So good job on that

felt the same,that was awesome, nothing to critique, I mean like perfection

Thanks dude

[<Stiiccy>]

dude ur to fuckin smart lol...
great job i seen nothing to complain about

[James R.]

Damn. It's all been said before this post. There's nothing to critique. You asshole lol. And to think 2 days ago you lost the spark. Smfh. If this is losin the spark then I'd hate to see you when you get back on the ball.

[MC Anonymous]

Damn. It's all been said before this post. There's nothing to critique. You asshole lol. And to think 2 days ago you lost the spark. Smfh. If this is losin the spark then I'd hate to see you when you get back on the ball.

Haha thanks man

[Slim Zaddy]

it's sick MC ,, i do really love it ,, gd job here bro

[Ella]

i dunno much bout this shit..
but wOw.. that wz insane
=]

[MC Anonymous]

i dunno much bout this shit..
but wOw.. that wz insane
=]

Thanks hun!

[Arabian Shady]

structure was one of the best parts man, lyrics were pretty dope, sick shit all in all man
Keep it goin